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GoldEmerald23
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You can write your own stories here just dont make them too long heres one I wrote in the third grade

On a serene day in the year????b.c., Rock, a Greek warrior, is walking over to his best friendâs (the turtleâs) abode over near lava pond, when suddenly it starts bubbling and a Lava Hydra comes out! Turtle and Rock were just about to fight it when a zebra said the fight was unwinnable. The Turtle asked why Hercules could kill the monster but they couldnât? The Zebra answered âHercules killed the normal Hydra with fireâ. So then they understood that most likely the âEvil Lion Kingâ Cyan had sent his pet Lava Hydra.
The Greek warrior Rock knew Cyan had been trying to seize the land for years, but now he had summoned an impossible creature and thatâs when the Zebra, Turtle, and Rock remembered they didnât have any weaponry. So they traveled to the town Kasuneâs Blacksmith who had a bow and several iron arrows ready for them, they asked if they had 5 gold nuggets after some serious arguments Rock finally gave them up, so he made them 2 swords, a knife, and a shield. Next they went outside to find the town on fire and a Cyclopes standing on a building laughing. With their new weapons they started attacking the Cyclopes, but were knocked away by his club then he picked up a piece of roof as a shield.
The Turtle then shot some arrows past the shield to the Cyclopes and the creature went down. Now they left town to go to the old castle of Cyan for rest, oddly they all lay down and had the same dream, seeing Cyanâs dead brother, The Minotaur, telling them to try and fight him. Next the Minotaur slammed into the turtle knocking him over, next The Zebra slashed at him from the front, but he still stood perfectly, finally Rock hit him from behind and he disappeared. They finally woke up in the castle and saw the Greek Army standing outside in the field, so all the friends went to join them.
The army were now fighting Cyanâs army and the friends were continuing on to the current castle. The castle was full of statues, paintings, and windows. They continued outside to Cyan and charged at him because of their confidence of defeating his brother. The King had swiftly knocked them over with multiple deadly slashes automatically making The Zebra, and Turtle pass away. Finally that is why the Animal Kingdom will never be peaceful in some places for Cyan was not defeated and nether was Rock.

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GoldEmerald23
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Srry about the weird thing something went wrong while typing

deathopper
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[/b]We have a whole sub-forum called the AMW (Art, Music,[b]Writting) were you can post your story. The Tavern is for random topics that don't have a specific category.
The weird signs are symbols AG doesn't recognise.

GoldEmerald23
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I didnt realize that

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You could ask a mod to move the thread or just make a new one in AMW.

eaglepaw
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hey send it again.
i dont understand your story.

GoldEmerald23
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Again this is the story I wrote in third grade:

On a serene day in the year????b.c., Rock, a Greek warrior, is walking over to his best friends (the turtles) abode over near lava pond, when suddenly it starts bubbling and a Lava Hydra comes out! Turtle and Rock were just about to fight it when a zebra said the fight was unwinnable. The Turtle asked why Hercules could kill the monster but they couldnt? The Zebra answered Hercules killed the normal Hydra with fire. So then they understood that most likely the Evil Lion King Cyan had sent his pet Lava Hydra.
The Greek warrior Rock knew Cyan had been trying to seize the land for years, but now he had summoned an impossible creature and thats when the Zebra, Turtle, and Rock remembered they didnt have any weaponry. So they traveled to the town Kasunes Blacksmith who had a bow and several iron arrows ready for them, they asked if they had 5 gold nuggets after some serious arguments Rock finally gave them up, so he made them 2 swords, a knife, and a shield. Next they went outside to find the town on fire and a Cyclopes standing on a building laughing. With their new weapons they started attacking the Cyclopes, but were knocked away by his club then he picked up a piece of roof as a shield.
The Turtle then shot some arrows past the shield to the Cyclopes and the creature went down. Now they left town to go to the old castle of Cyan for rest, oddly they all lay down and had the same dream, seeing Cyans dead brother, The Minotaur, telling them to try and fight him. Next the Minotaur slammed into the turtle knocking him over, next The Zebra slashed at him from the front, but he still stood perfectly, finally Rock hit him from behind and he disappeared. They finally woke up in the castle and saw the Greek Army standing outside in the field, so all the friends went to join them.
The army were now fighting Cyans army and the friends were continuing on to the current castle. The castle was full of statues, paintings, and windows. They continued outside to Cyan and charged at him because of their confidence of defeating his brother. The King had swiftly knocked them over with multiple deadly slashes automatically making The Zebra, and Turtle pass away. Finally that is why the Animal Kingdom will never be peaceful in some places for Cyan was not defeated and nether was Rock.

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