I had to write a for social class. I'm Canadian. Here goes. Asmahan Monsour was just a little girl But the ref of the soccer game, CHANGED HER WORLD!
The wearing of the hijab, is part of her religion The lazy referee, he did not listen She had to quit the game, because of her hijab!
The the media was all over Monsour They did not think it's fair what the did to her!
She brought it to the court because of, discrimination On Monsour's side she had the whole nation In the end she got to play her, soccer game Asmahan Monsour, remember the name!
(That's the first part. I'm not going to put the rest. Copyright man. My friend has rights to the other half of the song.)
Here's a theme song I wrote about the adventures of Man-tree. He's a half tree, half man superhero type guy. Not a half man, half tree, cause that would be a Tree-man. Or maybe it's the other way around...
Chorus:
It's the Man Tree Not a Manatee But a man tree A hero for you and me
Man Treeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
He has roots, but walks free! Bears Fruits, but can see!
Man Treeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
He fights off thieves With his green leaves And for those who believes Great goals He achieves
It's the Man Tree Bane of the bourgeoisie He loves vitamin D And drinks lots of tea
Man Treeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
He has skin like bark And waits in the dark Protector of the park And sings like a lark
You say that you love me,but I know that you don't. You want to make me happy, but I know that you won't.
You always tell these lies, and know its making me wanna cry. You always do these things, and now your pulling my strings.
You think your so cool, when I'm acting the fool. You think your so hot, when your obviously not.
(okay well um this (what I'm saying right now) isn't part of the song this next part is a rap and I don't know if it's any good or not but....... please tell me and I'm a girl so it may not be good but just please tell me if it's good or not and please be honest and i wrote this song myself so......ya please tell me what you think of it)
Mister you think that your so cool / when your girl over their is acting the fool. Now lemmie tell you something that aint right when your girl over their sight. Well you see your not playing the game right, when you think your the only one so bright. Now I'm gonna leave you two up to it, so you better step up and just go do it.
Bridge(slow part): You say that you love me, but I know that you don't. You want to make me happy, but I know that you won't. You always tell these lies, and now it's making me wanna cry. You always do these things and now your pulling my strings.
You say that you love me, now I think that you do. You want to make me happy, and now you sure would.
You don't always tell the truth, but sometimes that's okay. You always do these things, and now I have to say.
Ending: You say that you love me, now I think that you do. You want to make me happy, and now you sure would.
(and can you guys help me think of a song title for this. I can't think of anything) PLEASE COMMENT AND BE HONEST ABOUT IT.............PLEASE!!!!!!!!
The song is alittle weird because it is about a soccer game and a girl is wearig a hijab and the ref takes her to take it off. So I guess this song is abot didcrimination of other religions. But has a good point to the song.
@karly605 that song sounds like it could be really good. pity we can't add music to it, although i can imagine music that would go with it. By the way, the use of the wording "ulling my strings" makes me think of heartstrings. maybe that could be a good name. Just a suggestion. Or maybe you could call it "ulling my strings".
thanks a lot. That really means something to me. I have worked on like my own original songs over the course of like 2 years and I like some of them it's just that I never get any ones opinion. I have another song, but I will upload it to here on 2/20/12. hopefully you will comment back before I upload it, but if you don't please comment on my next uploaded song. oh and also, if you don't like the song, I just wanted you to know that this is my first song I ever wrote and it may not be that good. :^)
Sorry, I accidentally put the wrong title up. "why" is the title for my newest song. The one I described in the message above is called "come back". Sorry for the mishaps. Hope you can follow along with this. Sorry if you got confused. Oh and Shadow, if you are reading this, can you ask your friends or family to read my song(s)? you can just message on what they said. Please if you can and thanks if you do. :^)
Hey, sorry about not posting my song up on the date I said I would. The truth is, I don't feel comfortable putting my other songs up. Sorry if I disappointed anyone.
Here's the english version of part of a song that I meant to be sung in french. (which I woulda done) xD
I had a dream Not so very long ago, I had a dream I sung a pretty song, although I had a dream I donât know much But I do know of beauty I know how to love, and I love to be loved I had a dream Not so very long ago, I had a dream It wasnât very strong, although I had a dream
