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This story I'm creating is based on fictional events, but making Armor Games as real as can be with castles and events that are exaggerated, but half true. Enjoy.


Chapter 1: The First Glance

In a land, far far away, lived a castle. A castle in which many creatures lived, not only human, but anything one can think of. As I left my castle of Addicting Games, I myself was lost. I couldn't bear to think what life would be like alone as a big, fat, and ugly green ogre. Every village and town I wanted to call home were only filled with people running away with fear when they looked at me.

What used to be called home, I left in regret. I've lost both my beautiful wife and my lovely daughter on the out. The Addicting Games knights and kings kicked me out the day I went mad. I opened my eyes to see everybody in the room lying in agony on the floor. I, myself was confused and afraid. And so was my family. I turn to see my wife Afya holding my 6 year old daughter Shimah. Both with tears down their eyes. I didn't remember one thing. I stepped forward, but they stepped back. I look into my daughter's little blue eyes. She turned, afraid.

"Baby," I said calmly, âItâs okay, daddy just..." That's when the door behind me knocked down. Me and my family jumped in fear as I turned to see what happened. 7 men all dressed in crimson red barged in with a bang. As I hear the screams behind me, immediately I jump forward to attack. Almost simultaneously, the one man up front zapped me with this gun. I saw a flash of green hit me square in the face, bringing me straight to the ground. Then everything was black.

Now that I've been kicked out of the castle, I've been trying to find a new home. I always try to keep my family out of my head, I can't bear the thought. But one day, December 13, 2010, I was searching the forest for food. I then saw a light at the end of the trees. It was glaring with yellow. I ignored it for a while, concentrating on finding food. I had a basket of every fruit when I soon realized that I've gotten much closer to the light. The temptation of me stepping forward was huge. I decided to investigate. For the most reason of it being a village for me to live in.

As I got even closer to this light, my stomach kept churning with every step I took, with both fear and excitement. My face was hitting branches from the pine trees, but I didnât stop. The trees started clearing up, and the light was suddenly in front of my face. I emerge from the forest to see a beauty. Is what not a village. It was indeed not a town. But a castle. A huge castle. A castle at least a square mile. The castle was surrounded by crystal clear water, floating with fish of many kinds. I then looked 2 inches to the right: a bridge. A bridge that led to the entrance of the castle. I dropped my basket of foods, not caring one bit. It was not any old structure; It was the AG Kingdom!

More coming soon (:

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acmed
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And feel free to share any ideas about what should happen. I'd love to hear from you!

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Thanks for the feedback. And yes, I know what I'm doing next, just suggestions are nice. Right? (:

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Talk about all the other odd creatures (armatars) there. Also how you wandered into the tavern and started conversations with the locals.

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You basically just gave away the story. I was planning on making cormyn the head shark, Fantasy4life the fire fox.

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Perhaps you could talk about how you went to the town registry (newcomers forum) first.

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Mind reader! All of these are gonna be in it! 2nd chapter though won't be up until like August (I'm going on vacation this Saturday).

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ya id luv to hear more

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It seemed like you started in the beginning and skipped some. It's nice though.

acmed
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It seemed like you started in the beginning and skipped some


I don't understand what you are saying. It went beginning, flashback, present.
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