Red Like blood dribbling out of a heart, Like a sun dribbling with light, Like love dribbling out of my soul For you.
Orange Like an orange fruit abundant with flavor, Like a sword abundant with heat from the fight, Like a warning abundant with fright For the oncoming storm. Yellow Like a wonderful sunshiny sun, Like a highlighter oh so wonderful, Like a sign so wonderful that people must obey it; If they donât lives will be lost.
Green Like a plant growing quickly out of the ground, Like a vest growing smaller after every wash cycle, Like your eye growing more wrinkled over the years From those wonderful smiling moments. Blue Like a open summer sky, Like a ballerina tutu fluttering open in the dance, Like a pond only open For one summer; this one.
Indigo Like the inside of my room with the light off, Like the inside of my eyelid when I sleep, Like the inside of a blackened piece of coal In the fireplace.
Violet Like the end of the rainbow, Like a ribbon in a box, Like the sorrowful balloon with a broken string From the fair.
i would say it is cleverly written , with a colour seperating the sections, and repetition "abundance" etc. it is good but i think to improve it maybe a final section to sum it up - just an idea . Good work!
