once a pon a time there was a boy who had a teddy bear and one morning he woke to find that his teddy bear was gone so he serched everyware all round until he found him on the tallest building in the town (wich isnt very tall and he had a little lighting toy from the boys bedroom and it was waving it about ( while it was on ) and it turn to see the boy then fell to the ground and stoped moving he told his mother but she didnt belive him so what was the teddy doing???
Once* upon* a time, there was a boy who had a teddy bear. One morning he woke to find that his teddy bear was gone, so he searched* everywhere* around until he found him on the tallest building in the town. (Which isn't very tall. The teddy bear had a little lighting toy from the boys bedroom. He was waving the toy about while it was on.) He turned to see the boy, but then he fell to the ground and stopped* moving. The boy told his mother, but she didn't believe* him. What was the teddy doing?
Once* upon* a time, there was a boy who had a teddy bear. One morning he woke to find that his teddy bear was gone, so he searched* everywhere* around until he found him on the tallest building in the town. (Which isn't very tall. The teddy bear had a little lighting toy from the boys bedroom. He was waving the toy about while it was on.) He turned to see the boy, but then he fell to the ground and stopped* moving. The boy told his mother, but she didn't believe* him. What was the teddy doing?
1) This reply is brilliant 2) This should probably be on forum games
You buzz-killed the thread, Quirinus. I don't mind you guys creating a post-response story thread, I'm not sure if any of the other mods would, but typically these types of threads don't involve users taking the time to point out the slight grammar and spelling mistakes of the OP. If you wish to create another, then create another. Just keep the obvious to yourself next time? It doesn't really do much in the first place.
