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MagicTree
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Hi. This is a thread where we do a massive Renga. For those who don't know what a Renga is, it is a Japanese style of poem where one person does the first half and the other does the second half. The style is 57577, identical to a Tanka. I will start the poem and somebody will do the next part, and it will repeat until we have a massive poem.


Remember, 57577
The theme is: Air

Peace in the blue sky
Then the clouds swirled above me,

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EmperorPalpatine
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A swift breeze moved me,
The clouds darkened and deepened:
A drop of rain fell on me,

MagicTree
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Followed by many more
Through the sky the lightning came,

IcyGryphon
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And smited me with a,
Might never seen before,

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