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mrTrippy
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Well I am taking a digital photography class in school so I decided to post some of my pics here.

Sunset:

http://i1123.photobucket.com/albums/l549/Mista_Trippeh/100_0619.jpg

Colored Trees:

http://i1123.photobucket.com/albums/l549/Mista_Trippeh/Mltie.jpg

Pencil:

http://i1123.photobucket.com/albums/l549/Mista_Trippeh/newpencil1.jpg

Third picture was photoshoped of course, but the picture was taken by me. Tell me what you think please.

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AngelOfEpik
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Cool pics trippy the trees pic is amazingly beautiful, and the death pic makes me think about like plague as it all takes place in a graveyard, but overall very cool pics

AngelOfEpik
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oh and on the water fall i like the pic but on the bottom the twigs stick up kinda distract me from the waterfall

mrTrippy
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The rest look okay, though the 'colorful trees' one was a little on the bright side.


I remembered last night that that was a picture of a painting so all the credit goes to my friend.

leave me suggestions on why I should take.


I meant to say 'what' not 'why'.

the twigs stick up kinda distract me from the waterfall


Well I didn't want to fall in the water trying to move them. I might do another try tomorrow.
master565
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Waterfall:


This one isn't very colorful. There are only 4 or so main colors that i can see. You can try enhancing certain colors in photoshop, but I'm not sure how great i will come out.
master565
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Soccer Domo:


I actually completely love this one. I'm not even really sure what's grabbing me. Also, good job on the out of focus background, it's what really enhances close up pictures. The only suggestion i could give is to rotate the soccer ball so that it "old navy" isn't in view, it kind of makes it look like your advertising for them and takes me a bit out of the picture.
mrTrippy
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The only suggestion i could give is to rotate the soccer ball so that it "old navy" isn't in view, it kind of makes it look like your advertising for them and takes me a bit out of the picture.


Well I can't really retake it, but I think I can photoshop that out.

I actually completely love this one. I'm not even really sure what's grabbing me.


It is Domo everyone loves Domo everyone
master565
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Well I can't really retake it, but I think I can photoshop that out.


I was bored so i did it for you :b

http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/8787/domobj.jpg

It is Domo everyone loves Domo everyone


Can't argue with that.
mrTrippy
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I was bored so i did it for you :b


Why thank you. You get a gold star for doing that. You did a very nice job.
mrTrippy
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Well here is that retake of the waterfall.

Waterfall v2:

http://i1123.photobucket.com/albums/l549/Mista_Trippeh/100_0622-Copy.jpg

And another Domo picture.

Lazy Domo:

http://i1123.photobucket.com/albums/l549/Mista_Trippeh/013.jpg

Well that is it for now, tell me what you think and what I should take a picture of next.

AngelOfEpik
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lazy domos mouth like literally makes my eyes sore, and i can can see domos tag :P might wanna take that out I like v2 waterfall, more of a scenic picture however still think that place has too much grass, but stilll a very great picture, i think it almost camls me as it seems mellow I REALLY LIKE IT. I like mellow pictures domo is ok but i dont think you should make a base on him. I suggest scenic pictures, i like there varients of time of day and place GJ

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DOMO!!! xD nice photos :P... awesome creek picts 2.

master565
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Waterfall v2:


Once again, it's not your fault on the picture, it's just that the location is lacking color. It's all brown which is very boring. It's nothing a photoshop or two can't solve. I'm not going to do an amazing job, but here is a really quick demonstration i made of how you can improve it. All i did was tint the water dark blue and the sides green. (yes the sides look terrible and the pictures a little dark now, but this thing took less then a minute to put together)

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/428/waterfallag.jpg
mrTrippy
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I like v2 waterfall, more of a scenic picture however still think that place has too much grass


Well I can't change nature.

I suggest scenic pictures


Ok I guess I can do that.

xD nice photos


Thank you.

And Master565 thank you.

Well here are some more pictures.

Yellow Flower

http://i1123.photobucket.com/albums/l549/Mista_Trippeh/106_1262.jpg

The City:

http://i1123.photobucket.com/albums/l549/Mista_Trippeh/DSCF4533.jpg

House Upon A Hill:

http://i1123.photobucket.com/albums/l549/Mista_Trippeh/HouseUponAHill.png

Well that is it for now. Tell me what you think and you can leave a suggestion on what I could take and I may take it.
mrTrippy
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Another city picture:

http://i1123.photobucket.com/albums/l549/Mista_Trippeh/DSCF4541.jpg

Well that is it for now.

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Some of these are really nice, but the others lack a focal point.

For example those two city pictures. My eyes don't know where to look so I scramble all across the picture and end up losing interest. Whereas the yellow flower has an obvious focal point, and it looks much nicer.

Also, it looks as if you just pulled out your camera without configuring it and just shot at free will. Which really isn't bad if that's what you're going for, but that's just my input. Don't take criticism to heart, because there will always be critics. Keep on shooting~

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