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I use to read these books called an American Novel where it would tell a story like somebody writing in a Journal. I thought hey I should try to write a story in a Zombie Surviver Perspection. Tell me if I should continue or stop after a few of the Entries but please don't tell me to stop at the first one and any tips or Requests I would like to have.

Story 1: John Steele

11/03/11-3:30 P.M.

If you are reading this I am either dead or have sold this to the government after I have lived through this nightmare. My name is John Steven Steele. I am 16 years old and I am a survivor of a Zombie Apocalypse.

It is November 3rd. 2011. The Zombies came a month ago and killed my entire family. My brother, my mom, my dad, all of them... I was able to barricade myself inside the back of a old Coca-Cola Truck and the zombies are leaving me alone probably because of the smell of Coke is masking my Scent. I hope I can live through this.

11/02/11-9:45 P.M.

I found a gun. Its a small little Snub-Nose Pistol and it only has 3 rounds left but it works. Here is a small picture of it.



I hope I find more ammo. I'll write more later.
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