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TackyCrazyTNT
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I was bored and I thought this sounded like a good idea. Didn't put it on my other thread because it would get too messy.

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/5323/comic1.png

By the way, inside the clock the squiggly line is bacon.

More when I have time. I'd rather you didn't judge my shading too much. I know it sucks. XD

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waluigi
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If only I had an alarm clock like that. I would be so happy...
Great comic, although it was a bit hard to read in places, namely the last caption. I love the artwork though.

EmperorPalpatine
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Good plot. Good artwork. Wording was just a bit small/sloppy.

Wasn't there a real bacon cooking alarm clock? Yep it was on Shark Tank here.

nichodemus
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Would like to see more of it, before I can judge fully! Otherwise, rather good effort, keep it up!

TackyCrazyTNT
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If only I had an alarm clock like that. I would be so happy...
Great comic, although it was a bit hard to read in places, namely the last caption. I love the artwork though.


Good plot. Good artwork. Wording was just a bit small/sloppy.


Sorry about that... I tried to improve it a bit with this one, but it still might be sort of hard to read...
Thanks about the artwork! :P

Yeah, I remember reading about the bacon alarm clock somewhere. I was looking for something weird. XD

Would like to see more of it, before I can judge fully! Otherwise, rather good effort, keep it up!


Thank you!
TackyCrazyTNT
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#2 :P

http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/5029/comic2d.png

The lanyard says (in case I wrote too messily)

Your name: <Your name here>
Occupation: Main Character
Storyline: Haven't thought of one, lol
Age: 16
Additional notes: Penguin, lol
Have fun!
From, Your author: Tacky

waluigi
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Those are some very long legs on that girl. I still love it and can't wait to see where you're going with this.

Kyouzou
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Nice I'm liking it so far, the writing is a bit hard to read at points, but I shall persevere through it. And I love the constant breaking of the fourth wall.

Wailugi is right, those are some ridiculously long legs, I approve.

waluigi
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Confound AG for moving my last post the entire way up the page...

Anyways, I forgot to mention that I really like the note on the lanyard. LOL penguin.

Dragonblaze052
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Tacky, I assume That her room only has three walls?

TackyCrazyTNT
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Danke to the four of you! I will improve on the drawings and the handwriting.

ablr
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Wow, that's actually really good. I look forward to you posting more.

BoredMartian
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You have really good, I dunno, hands? Well, you draw very nicely.

Nurvana
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You have really good, I dunno, hands


Great choice of words Martian...
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Nomad

nice comics i'd like to see more

TackyCrazyTNT
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You have really good, I dunno, hands? Well, you draw very nicely.

Great choice of words Martian...


HAHAHAHAHAHA I just saw this. Thank you for the compliment.

nice comics i'd like to see more


Thanks. I have the storyline all mapped out, but no time to draw it. I could upload some quick sketches... hmmmm *is talking to self*
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