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Here, I will post poems that i make. I want also advice for them, as i am a devoted writer, Thanks!

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In the end

as the last breath escapes me,
As my spirit becomes eternal,
I have but one question.
In the end, will my efforts be in vain?

All the good I've done,
all the lives I saved.
Will they be worth it?
Or will they not matter?

As life and death take their toll,
while the spirits of the dead continue to judge me,
I wonder if my life was worthy,
and if my death was respectable.

I was a happy man,
no depression in my life.
My family supported me,
I felt completely satisfied.

When the time comes,
I will defend my case.
For the dead spirits,
show no mercy to demons.

If I had failed,
if I had lost,
if I had not given my life,
I would not be living.

For I had made grave mistakes,
and paid a large price.
I will not stagger,
In fighting for the afterlife.

I held my own,
I did prevail.
Now i will live,
in the new life.

Energy is only borrowed,
and must be given back.
But if you are judged,
you may have some for yourself.

I guess in the end,
I was tried with justice.
And with all of my efforts,
I now sit at my own throne
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How did all of you like it?

Tell me how i did, constructive criticism is always welcome in my book.

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