What should i think, of life itself? Is it a purpose? or is it a gift? What are we meant to do? That is a great question. But, you must know in your way. Because there is only one way to find out. That is what I can say to you. you are in control of yourself. You are the master of your mind. Hold tightly, your very soul. I, have my goals. But it is one thing to have them, and another to achieve them. Remember this difference. You can achieve them. In one simple way. Be who you are. And you will be a gift to the world. I am trying to achieve my goals. What you are to do, is a simple thing. Never lose sight of your reality. We all have made mistakes. we all have faced the gauntlet. But, if we do not learn from them, We can consider ourselves as good as nothing. If you have your purpose, and I have mine, and all of us have ours, we are doing nothing wrong, unless we doubt ourselves. We can't get past this, don't give to others, if you can't give to yourself. Never forget these words, cherish them in your mind. When you come back, I wish that you will be as successful as always, and you will know, that me, your family, your country, and even the world, is at your side. but, whatever you do, snap back to reality, know that you can make a difference, in your life, and the lives of others.
Just a little motivational speech i wrote. I am trying to expand all of my generes of writing.
In india, there was a great feast, in which ambassadors from other countries were invited to attend. The food was delicious, and the people were happy. But, there came a controversial topic. Men could stay calm under pressure better than woman. There were two people not interested in the conversation. The british ambassador, and the maid. The british ambassador was attracted at the interesting sight of the maid sitting there quietly, as she was being insulted. He than noticed that her muscles retracted, and that her body was tighter than usual. she called over a little boy, and whispered in his ear. The boy's eyes suddenly widened and then the boy ran to the kitchen, filled a bowl with milk, and set it outside the doors, that were foolishly left open. The british ambassador knew what this meant. There was a cobra under the table, and the maid discovered it. The ambassador devised a plan. "I wish to see all of this happen! Everybody don't move a muscle. All who do will be fined 100 rupees. I will count to 300 seconds, hold your stances." all of the people stayed still, and the ambassador started counting. The cobra emerged. The cobra went to the milk slowly, and the ambassador followed slowly. The ambassador quickly shut the door behind the cobra. All of the others were impressed. They agreed that a man has shown, yet another act of calmness in a situation. Then, the ambassador asked the woman. "how did you know that the cobra was under the table?"
It crawled on my foot,
replied the woman.
Just a little morale that i wrote. Tell me how it was!
Try to vary your sentence structure, since most of them merely describe a single action or person and it does get a little tiresome reading it in such a fashion. Also, try to expand your vocab a little to make it more interesting.
There were two people not interested in the conversation. The british ambassador, and the maid.
This can easily be merged:
The British ambassador and the maid languished in the corner, bored senseless out of their minds.
Unless of course you were going for a more Aesop-Fable-Dry-Style approach.
Oh one more point. Your story seems a little abrupt at certain points, in particular when the maid ''suddenly'' discovers out of the blue that there's a cobra present.
