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sinnikis
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It was December 21, 2012. That was when it happened. They knew it would, the scientists and theorists had been expecting it. The government tried to keep the original outbreak unnoticed. At first they succeeded because all they had to was claim the host of the disease was crazy. But then it spread and people realized what they were for the first time. They were Zombiesâ¦

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sinnikis
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Hey so please tell me what you think... I'm working on the rest and i Might post it if people like this.Also I apologize for the end I copied from Word so it messed up the last word. Alright thanks

Nurvana
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You'll need to post more if you want any kind of concrete opinion from critics.

sinnikis
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Nomad

okay thanks

royironarm
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Good start, but real short.

espadaxin2
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keep it up.

xAyjAy
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December 21, 2012.

i like how it has something to do with the maya calendar and that people think something bad happens on that day. i also like that it is a zombie apocalypse. are you writteing the story in the middle of the apocalypse with survivors or at the begining of the apocalypse? please post more!

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