So basically I have been playing Skyrim for a month(over a hundred or so hours spent) and some pretty epic things have happened to me while playing it which led me to the idea of documenting them. Feedback is appreciated(good or bad)!
The First Story: Part 1
The arrow flew by my shoulder. Turning around I saw three Forsworn Archers looking to avenge the death of their comrades. Not having time to equip my glass bow I took cover behind a boulder nearby. I took out my enchanted Skyforge Steel Sword out and took out the Shield of Ysgramor. Two more arrows flew by my shoulders. I got up and brought my shield up. One arrow bounced off my shield. As I was about to charge I heard a familiar screech. Cursing under my breath, I took cover behind the boulder to equip my glass bow. I scanned upwards and spotted the dragon preparing to dive at one of the Forsworn. I drew my bow and shot and arrow which hit it's mark. Questioning if I should keep up my ranged tactic I hear another screech. I equipped my sword and shield. Not wanting to admit the truth I fled, only to become ensnared in flames which was not a problem for my healing spell. Realizing I must fight I shouted, "FUS RO DAH!" The first dragon finished off the Forsworn and both were now focused on me. I put up my shield and equipped my flames spell, letting the fire tickle my fingers with warmth in the harsh cold. One dragon landed. Seeing my chance I bolted towards it, spewing fire from my handed into the face of the dragon. I got closer and struck it with my sword twice. Next thing I knew I had become engulfed in fire. I then proceeded to equip my healing spell in both my hands. I got out of range of the dragon and started healing myself, feeling a sense of calm as I became rejuvenated by the spell. I then took out my sword and shield and faced the dragons. To be continued...
And as I said before feedback is always appreciated!
Good. It got a bit repetitive at times. Try using other verbs to describe what the character is doing. For example, you say "took out" and "got up" a lot. Repeating those words makes the story extremely bland and lifeless. Other than that, it was pretty good. You should write more!
Good. It got a bit repetitive at times. Try using other verbs to describe what the character is doing. For example, you say "took out" and "got up" a lot. Repeating those words makes the story extremely bland and lifeless. Other than that, it was pretty good. You should write more
Thanks! I did realize I used some words a tad much shortly after posting.
The First Story Part 2
The dragon flew up joining it's partner as both smothered me with their flames. Luckily my elven bracers could resist the power of fire. A dragon landed and I charged at it, hoping it was the dragon who recently flew up. As I drew near I noticed it's head wasn't covered in it's blood, or mine. The dragon snapped it's jaw at me but it's head bounced off of the heavy metal of the Shield of Ysgramor. Seeing my chance I began to swing crazily at the dragon with my sword. It seemed I barely did any damage to it all. The other dragon landed and both drew their heads back and unleashed devastating streams of flame. I ran back to the boulder and used my healing potion, since I had no time to use my spell. Both dragons flew back up and flew in circles above my head. I shouted, "STRUN BAH QO!" It began ti rain and shortly after lightning began to strike the two dragons as they both flew around me. The weaker one landed and I put my shield up to ignite my flames spell. We both produced a stream of flame one coming from my hand the other from the mouth of the dragon. I drew in closer to lash out with my sword. The dragon lashed out at me with it's head but I deflected it with my sword. I leaped onto the dragon's head and began delivering brutal strikes at it's head until it gave in. I jumped off as the dragon fell. I began absorbing the dragon's soul. Odd I thought, it was not long ago since I killed my first dragon in Whiterun and began feeling it's power being absorbed by me. But there was no time to be lost in thought. The other dragon landed and I began to charge. To be continued...again...
So basically Part 3 will be the end of my first story. Which story should I do next, My trek from Whiterun to High Hrothgar(more interesting than it sounds) or the time I had to fight two sabre-tooth cats trying to get to Winterhold.
