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royironarm
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For my english class...

The branches of the poem's tree
reach far above the flowing sea
but deep the meaning is undercover
in dank caves unknown for us to discover.
Do not worry, it doesn't have to be found,
for it could be impossible, with not a single sound.
Or we could make our own meaning,
and be ridden of this curious feeling.

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royironarm
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FORGETTHAT ABPVE THIS

For my english class...

The branches of the poem's tree
reach far above the flowing sea
but deep the meaning is undercover
in dank caves unknown for us to discover.
Do not worry, it doesn't have to be found,
for it could be impossible, with not a single sound.
Instead we could make our own meaning,
and be ridden forever of this curious feeling.

xAyjAy
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xAyjAy
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dank caves

did you mean dark caves?

i can not see any differences between these two poems. anyway, good poem.

Hypermnestra
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did you mean dark caves?

Dank is like damp and musty.

i can not see any differences between these two poems. anyway, good poem.

It's in the last two lines.
Or we could make our own meaning,
and be ridden of this curious feeling.

Instead we could make our own meaning,
and be ridden forever of this curious feeling.


Anyway, it could use some work on the meter and maybe divide it up into stanzas, but otherwise it's okay. What grade are you in?
royironarm
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grade 9. we have just started our poetry unit.

Hypermnestra
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grade 9. we have just started our poetry unit.

Have you learned about poetic meter yet?
royironarm
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slightly. i havent tried it yet.

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not bad considering you just started your poetry

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