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Faunbard
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I made a thread about an hour ago about an AG poetry exchange, to see if you guys would like that, where you can post your poetry (finished or a draft) and receive constructive criticism from the readers and writers of AG.
Well this is it.
I know some of you love poetry, but are afraid for others to see it.
Like me.
Let the poetry begin? ( I'm finding it hard to close this entry post!)

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jezz
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Or we could create our own threads for poetry and get critic from others there, a bit like what we're already doing? This thread basically just sums up the whole AMW forum, so it doesn't really have a point..

Freakenstein
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That's basically how things have been for a long time. One would either post in the poetry contests or create their own poetry stock thread and post anything they created inside. The amount of activity would dictate whether the thread stayed afloat in the 1st or second page or be buried in the abyss.

aknerd
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The title led me to believe that there would be some sort of trading involved, which I thought was a great idea. Kind of like the first line poetry, but instead of a first line, the person requests a topic/style from the next person.

zakyman
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...so do we make poems now? XD

aknerd
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...so do we make poems now? XD

Yes. Yes we do.

Beginnings
We step out onto a path
Creating asphalt with our strides
Under us, a road is discovered.
We never know where it goes, where it comes from
Are following the road, or making it?
Are we traveling, or exploring?
Does it matter?

Now, some one write me a limerick.
MoonFairy
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Well, I think you have a good purpose. Some people might now want to make threads for one poem, or make their own threads because they don't write much.

But if you want this to take off, you'll probably need to start some. I kinda hope it lasts for a while, but I doubt it will :<

However, we could always do what aknerd thought, and we could change the title.

dair5
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...so do we make poems now? XD


Eh. Might as well give it a shot.
Liar Liar

Uncertainty clouds my judgement.
I wonder what I do wrong.
I think to myself, as I always have.
I think about my past.
I think only about what my mind will let me remember,
A puzzle, that has lost a most of it's pieces.
And somehow I must figure out the picture.
And I lie to myself.
I tell myself I have figured it out,
that I know what the problem is this time for sure.
This time for sure, this time, for sure.
This time was like last time.
It was a mirage. One only I could believe.
And once I came to my answer that I knew was wrong,
but said was right.
And once I came to this answer that was about me,
but really, about a liar.
I know these answers are wrong.
I can't tell who I am, and so I look for others to tell me,
and they do. But I can't hear them.
I'm blind because I want to be,
I'm death because I want to be,
I'm mute because I want to be,
I'm lost because I want to be.
Because being lost, and ignorant, is easier,
then being found, and knowing.
Knowing of what they think, and who I am.
I scare myself, and I'm scared of them.
A coward, to afraid to step into the light.
Too afraid to take the beating that knowledge brings.
Too content, in his world of ignorance, and bliss.

Now I know who I am.
Or so it seems again.

Um, we don't need the poetry to be good right? I sortof just write what comes to mind. It expresses feelings.

Now, some one write me a limerick.


But limricks are haaaarrrdd. How do you write a limerick again?
Faunbard
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Hmmmmm....
I see what you guys are saying. Perhaps it would be better to make it kind of like the First Line Poetry thing like you guys are suggesting? I do like that idea and its my fault for forgetting about all the great writers who have their own threads dedicated to their works.
I had fun with the first line poetry thread, but the flaws of it was that someone would make the line for you be ' Poopy butthole' or something like that, making it hard to write an actual piece of literature that you can be proud of with something so immature.
So we could always keep this thread, but we could also make an AGPoetry Exchange 2.0 that's like aknerd suggested, where its similar to First Line Poetry, unless you would give a topic. ( and we could have rules, like no immaturity)
Do you guys like that idea?

jkl3848
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I have a thread called jkl3848's Poem Place. Check it out if you want.

The Moose
The moose walked onto the road,
The car rumbled towards it.
âOh, no. Not again.â The car thought.
There was a screech a scramble, a thud.
The moose ran away, uninjured this time.
But the moose must be cautious if he want to survive.

gnosiphile
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The limmerick has a set style
you can hit every once in a while.
If you concentrate hard,
you may yet be a bard,
or at least someone showing their guile.

jkl3848
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Poem of a Poem
I like writing poems.
I thinks it's fun.
You can fill them with rhymes,
and maybe some puns.
You can write all day.
Writing through the night.
Some poems are scary.
They can give you a fright.
Poems don't have to make,
a whole lot of sense.
My mom just gave me,
five dollars and ten cents.
We are coming to the end,
of this very fun poem.
My hair is messy,
I need a comb.

badboy97777
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Somewhere in the world of pixels...
There is a standing warrior.
Alone and in love with bavaria,
He shall stand swords and pistols.

Fighting for vengeance,
Dieing for love.
Stuck with a brain full of brilliance.
Asking for mercy from above.

With a burning hate from the inside,
Empty is the feeling of his life.
Holding right now a knife...
With all his power he fought and cried.
Eventually our hero... died.

The rhymes are:
A-B-B-A
A-B-A-B
A-B-B-A-A

I'm not very good at this, however I tried

badboy97777
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He shall stand with swords and pistols***!

killersup10
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this one is for you lauren.killersup knows that it was written in the first person.killersup does not have to make poems,songs, and stuff in the third.

why do they always
say"No",it shatters my heart
left to die alone

i cut myself now
thanks to you lauren i died
back there,on the road

the road you may ask
is the road called hope but now
there is not no hope

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