the bold fearless girlthe crack in the wall destroyingthe raggedy doctor____________________________________this is a poem for Amy Pond (watching via netflix and only on the second season with Matt Smith so please don't spoil anything.)
But your haiku has the wrong amount of syllables! D:It should be 5, 7, 5 but you used 5, 8, 6.How about, 'The crack in the bedroom wall', and just 'the raggedy man'
oh my mistake
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