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SirLegendary
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Well after making my poem (witch sucked) I decided to read more (witch I had done) and ask my english teacher to help me in writing things. It's summer here so I met up with him at my school.

Written by LEGEND_beast.
Starring Xcalibur45 And Knight_34

The story of "Armor Kingdoms finest"

PART 1.

This was the time when kings had ruled the kingdom's of their own. The time of sickness
and horrible deeds. The time where greed for gold was far worse than any other time in history.
Here there was battles, not by blood, no weapons but your mind. Arguements were done by discussing
them and asking opinions of the villigers. My name is Legend. I have been here a long time. I'm a duke and a ranker here. See many of us stay as serfs and squires to serve and have a living here.
But a lot of us too, like to fill the castles and the kingdoms and be Lords and more. One example would be an old friend, the 34th Knight. Everyone calls him knight. And another named Ex Cal. nicknamed that for making a bullet that had helped us in a war. But that has been put aside as said.
Yes this is not the perfect place to be exited about. But it's Armor Kingdom, the place where a lot of game to play were invented. And Innovated here.

THAT is the future.

This was when I was a knight years ago...

Horses raged as dragons had stormed through, people were running and all we were doing was waiting for orders. I had been on the ground with my pal were here too. We were running to help then a dragon just fell right infront of us, we did but run! "Throw me a sword!" knight raged out. He had dropped his when fighting an enemy a while back. "I only have one!!!" I screamed back. The dragon was chasing us. I threw a stick at it. Roar went dragon and ate it. Surpirised me and knight were as the dragon did not hesitate to bite it. I turned around to face the beast and had been hit by the dargons claw, hurt I was. I threw my sword to knight and he had scratched the dragon. "THAT'S ALL YOU CAN DO??!!" "You DID NOT EVEN TOUCH HIM!" We screamed at each other. Suddenly a ballista from a higher wall had flung into the dragons body. I saw a club atleast two yards away. Knight was distracting the beast as I desprately tried to reach the club. And again I get, the tail of the dragon land on my face. I grab the club stand, charge torward the dragon, swing it and manage to smack it on the face. Knight runs torwards the dragon with a chance for a good blow on the chest and fails at it. I gaze with my eye twitching as he falls and rolls all over. Suddenly X (Xcalibur45) Had jumped from a tower and knocked the dragon with a raging hammer then shot him crazily. "Knight, don't die!" I cried. "I'm not dead you idiot." he jerks at me, "do I look dead?!" "no.. sorry." Dragon was knocked. We left it there and ran away.

We started to eat in the tavern. People had always disscused about things here. Though after what had just happened barely anyone was here. X was basically a guy with a rifle, sitting with me and knight. "So... us guys, yeah, we killed the dragon huh?" X had started, Knight and I looked at each other. "Of course we slayed it, why do you think it was still breathing huh?" I had blabbered in sarcasm. "So we didn't?" X wondering.. "no, not exactly" Knight replied, smiling in glee.

People started to walk into the tavern and soon it was loaded.

To be continued...
Part two coming up.

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vinster132
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But can you put that part somewhere in the story? Please? Pretty please?

pHacon
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vinster, just let it be, if you really want something like that I'm sure a few people would be happy to write it up for you.

Anything made by a committee is inherently flawed, let Legend's story come out how he wants, because then it will be as good as he wants it to be, not as bad as others do. (not saying that your ideas are bad)

SirLegendary
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Hehehehhe I had ideas from them, I turned out good.

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Dude, your the master, he the student, of course you fight.

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Just read the whole story. Awesome! Had to wade through alot of comments though. Guess it shows how popular your stroy is. Maybe mine will be like that one day. Oh yeah if you need a knight who gets killed in some ridiculous way, probably invoving a banana, put me in.

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-The final Part-

We gathered a whole rebellion team against the king, oh and about vinster, he got trapped in a whole ultimate sword story witch ended up being the death of him.
We were preparing to charge towards the castle walls.
Now we have, Scot the fire magician (drunk too), Nater the swords man with the ten deadliest warriors, the dragon rebellion with sloth, and the last hundred of the rebellions of vinsters village.
And we also managed to gather the south warriors to help us.
And my father Myth Beast. He was the only person in Armor kingdom to escape the jail and help over a thousand of the rebellions that are gonna help win this, I hope.

It's night, and cold with snow smashing on us, the advantage is that when it's storming at night, guards are forced to go home.
Also we wore white suits and armor to bland in with the snow.
I also helped plan this out with the leaders, I know that the guards are worst in the cruel, cold snow.

"Legend, the signal, remember" Myth says, my father.
Our catapult was the signal, it will launch a flaming ball into the castle and blow the wall big enough for a load of us to get it.

It shoots, we all charge and we see the wall fall and crash in the snow. "FOR HONOR" shouts nater and Knight.
I charge at the front.
suddenly bullets start falling like rain at us, Darnit, they were ready! We go in and start fighting like crazy.
the snow turned dark read in the white moon, blood flying, there was so much on my face.
The AG kingdom massacre.
"legend, I will go to the towers and stop the gunners!" shouts My dad.

He starts running and fighting through the crowd and killing, stabbing, slashing, he block and strikes.

I start running towards, these two familiar warriors.
"hey, It's you guys who framed me!" I shout!
They charge and I strike I miss I feel a stab. I feel another through my chest, I breathe heavily.
"Run, kni....knight" I say.

I see my dad, he's running back towards me with tears, the suddenly surrounded with gunners, My expression on my face grew dim and dying, My dad shouts and charges, pulls his guns out and fires at all of them...

"Even if we die, my son I love you" he says...

... they fire back, he gets shot in the chest a load of times then in the stomach... After the rebels get slaughtered, sloth gets stabbed silver jaw was hit by thirteen ballistas, dies.
Blood of my dad falls on me.
nater trying to get to me get shot in the back then the face.
My eyes get sleepier. I was dying. everyone got shot and stabbed.
My dad watching me die as he is himself, gets shot in the face.

It was the king, he shot him last.
"NOOOOOOOO" I cry, I run with two big wholes in me and miss the shot at the king, suddenly another stab comes at my back through me, into the king.

It was Xcal, behind me, who killed the king.
"LEGEnd, you won't die without purpose, you die in honor." he says.
"though were not alive, Legend, you die in honor. Were a team, and we stick together! Die together!" Suddenly I hear a shot, It hit Xcal. I fall.
We fall, the kingdom falls.
"We... di..d it.... " I say.....

~the end~

SirLegendary
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The whole story!

PART 1.

This was the time when kings had ruled the kingdom's of their own. The time of sickness
and horrible deeds. The time where greed for gold was far worse than any other time in history.
Here there was battles, not by blood, no weapons but your mind. Arguements were done by discussing
them and asking opinions of the villigers. My name is Legend. I have been here a long time. I'm a duke and a ranker here. See many of us stay as serfs and squires to serve and have a living here.
But a lot of us too, like to fill the castles and the kingdoms and be Lords and more. One example would be an old friend, the 34th Knight. Everyone calls him knight. And another named Ex Cal. nicknamed that for making a bullet that had helped us in a war. But that has been put aside as said.
Yes this is not the perfect place to be exited about. But it's Armor Kingdom, the place where a lot of game to play were invented. And Innovated here.

THAT is the future.

This was when I was a knight years ago...

Horses raged as dragons had stormed through, people were running and all we were doing was waiting for orders. I had been on the ground with my pal were here too. We were running to help then a dragon just fell right infront of us, we did but run! "Throw me a sword!" knight raged out. He had dropped his when fighting an enemy a while back. "I only have one!!!" I screamed back. The dragon was chasing us. I threw a stick at it. Roar went dragon and ate it. Surpirised me and knight were as the dragon did not hesitate to bite it. I turned around to face the beast and had been hit by the dargons claw, hurt I was. I threw my sword to knight and he had scratched the dragon. "THAT'S ALL YOU CAN DO??!!" "You DID NOT EVEN TOUCH HIM!" We screamed at each other. Suddenly a ballista from a higher wall had flung into the dragons body. I saw a club atleast two yards away. Knight was distracting the beast as I desprately tried to reach the club. And again I get, the tail of the dragon land on my face. I grab the club stand, charge torward the dragon, swing it and manage to smack it on the face. Knight runs torwards the dragon with a chance for a good blow on the chest and fails at it. I gaze with my eye twitching as he falls and rolls all over. Suddenly X (Xcalibur45) Had jumped from a tower and knocked the dragon with a raging hammer then shot him crazily. "Knight, don't die!" I cried. "I'm not dead you idiot." he jerks at me, "do I look dead?!" "no.. sorry." Dragon was knocked. We left it there and ran away.

We started to eat in the tavern. People had always disscused about things here. Though after what had just happened barely anyone was here. X was basically a guy with a rifle, sitting with me and knight. "So... us guys, yeah, we killed the dragon huh?" X had started, Knight and I looked at each other. "Of course we slayed it, why do you think it was still breathing huh?" I had blabbered in sarcasm. "So we didn't?" X wondering.. "no, not exactly" Knight replied, smiling in glee.

People started to walk into the tavern and soon it was loaded.

To be continued...
Part two coming up.


PART 2

The days went as nothing was happening. The villagers were doing normal farming and that was it.

"Is something ever gonna happen?" Orion asked. (EnterOrion for asking). "I don't think so, It been a few days now" knight replies back but staring at a spoon. "what are you doing? I think your gonna get dumb by doing that." Orion was then starting to stare at knight.

It was evening and getting dark. I was out walking and making myself cozy down at the fields.
I here a bang. And it gets louder.
I look at where it's coming from. And I see a window and take a peek at what is happening.
"you fools, steeling gold from the king?!" A person blabs and shouts.
Then I hear murmuring and it was too silent that I couldn't here what they were saying.
I step in and see them, they drop bags of gold and pull their swords out.
They had unique swords, with writings engraved on them, the handles were nice and solid probably made out of armor crystals.
I pull my sword out I had made myself. Out of solid steel and iron.
"who are you?" I ask. "You won't need to know" they reply silently.
They make the first move, surprisingly elegantly and like a master of swordsmanship. I swing back to repel the attacks.
I look at my sword and it was breaking after blocking their attacks.
Eventually after fighting my last breath, they cut me in the arm and stab right through my left arm then knock me with the handle.
I wake, with the gold next to me, and the king with guard in front of me.
"Is that yours?" asks the king with anger and rage. "Sir I-" I was interrupted. "No, Guards send him away!" ...

Part 3

It was dark, cold, snowing and just unbearable.
I realized I was in a wooden platform. A curtain was surrounding me and I felt something around my neck.
I had no idea what was happening. I was scared.
Suddenly the curtains had opened and there was a crowd and I was outdoors in the cold snowy night.
"behold the thieve!" The king was beside me and shouting at the crowd with a bunch of guards with him.
"This thieve is to be hanged!!" the crowd jumps as the king shouts.

***at the tavern. "did you guys here what's gonna happen to legend??!!!" shouts another chef around.
Knight sees a poster on what was gonna happen, shocked in disbelief,
"legend would never!" knight raged.
He ran to the scene. Running through town and people and scared to death he was.
He saw what was gonna happen. He took a bow and arrow and shot the rope, down went legend.
The king had seen what happened and was enraged. The guards chased knight away.
I kicked a guard and had taken his swords. Then even more guards had came.
I had been fighting them, this was hard because I didn't want to hurt them, I was also trying to sort things out with the king...
This was too hard, I ran as fast as I could then I was trapped in the middle of maybe twenty guards.
Suddenly X cal jumped out of some house and had shot a lot of guards, the battle became intense.
Knight came back and fought his way to me and X cal. we were all in the middle of the circle.
"darnit Legend, were screwed!" knight shouts.

Part 4

Vinster had been a friend and I was hoping he could help me.
But now I'm stuck in a mess I can't fix.
We had finished the battle and had won.
Moon fairy had given us a map to travel away into the forrest with the rebellions.
It had pasted a few days and of course the king still wants my head.
Though the rebels were helping me.

It was afternoon riding horses and beasts to the forest. Vinster had been the rebel leader for a long time.
He rides a dragon he had captured and trained when he was young.
And me, I ride a horse. I've always wondered how it is to ride a dragon.
We were stopped by guards. They approached then after bribing them, them started to move.
An had been shot at us and hit knight. Vinster then attacks back with raging flames and his dragon burning everything. He was powerful though moon fairy sensed evil in him.
We kept moving and we had separate ways to go so we split. Moon fairy had left with the rebels.
"Are you sure you can leave Moon fairy with them?" Xcal asks.
"Yeah why them? Why not us?" Knight agrees in agony.
"Just shut up and move cmon" I reply back.

We kept moving and we saw a battle ahead of us.
We had seen the rebels in a village killing.
"what are you doing?!!!" I shout in rage!
Vinster had come to answer "You are weak still part of the king!"
"No don't do this!" Knight shouts.
Suddenly more dragons from the forrest come, the place now looks like a giant torch burning forever.
It was getting intense and I started to vinster.
His dragon had blown fire at me though I was able to dodge that vinster from the back had stabbed me...
I saw moon fairy... She was right... I-- I..

Everything was dark... I had no idea where I was.
I here a voice "Legend! Legend wake up!!!" I couldn't tell who it was, judging by the voice I think it was Holden.
"holden?" I speak.. "Yeah buddy wake up!" he shouts back.
Then I see more and more people around me. They all had some kind of thing on there shoulder.
It was shiny wood. With white paint, little picture of a skull.
"Who are those guys?" I ask. "they're my gang.
"hey" "hello" "hi" They all speak.
I get up and look around, it was a house.
I go outside and see a bunch'a dragons... I stare as scared I was. I tried to pull out my knife but it was gone. Darnit!
"Hey, looking for this?" I turn back, "They're our ride so don't do anything stupid."
"Who are you what are they again... ... exactly?" I ask.
"I am knock out sloth, but you can call me sloth. Those are the dragons, we ride em!" Sloth says.
"Uhmmm.. Okay. So sloth, you must be a rider then?" I look at the dragons while speaking. "Get one. Cmon they ain't bad at all!"
I try and climb one then it suddenly flies, Darnit! "it's okay get another that likes you."
They all fly, at this point I look stupid. Then one charges at me and stops, just there. It bows.
It was blue, with one wing made of cloth, must have been ripped out.
He had a mane, with horns sticking out, every part of him was blue. "His name is onslaught." sloth says.
I jump on. He flies and I grab on his horns. When I pulled left he went left, same as right. I guess that was how to control him. I patted him slowly and stroked his blue mane. I loved him.
Then I kicked him like a horse then he went faster! Wow, he was great.

We kept flying then we saw Vinster. Darnit!! I landed in front of him.
"A duel huh?" he asks with evil in his voice. "I guess" I reply.
He blows fire then Onslaught jumps into the air. I softly slap him in the neck then he blows a small ball of blue flames. I get the idea now! I slpa him harder then he shoots so hard vinster's dragon flies away real fast! I chase him!
"can you keep up!"

-New friend-

Darn! Chasing vinster is hard, I have no experience in this and I'm already up against someone stronger than me.
Errrr I keep slapping him and keep missing my shots.
Then I hear more flapping of wings behind me, "Hey need a hand!?" There was sloth and holden.
I finally catch up to vinster. He shoots one ball of fire at me and onslaught, darn we were falling!
The wind was strong, Holden was trying grab me with his dragon.
He couldn't reach, I tried grabbing the saddle on my dragon, Boom.

Unconscious.
I woke after that.
I was knocked on the head, from the bruise I could feel.
I guess I had landed in the middle of the cold windy forrest. It was foggy and windy, what made it worse was it was raining too.
I saw onslaught, he saw me then he ran towards me and flicked me up with his head and I landed on his back. Ouch, I was okay.
He was like a horse with wings and a giant jaw and body.

I look around. I saw a cave, I guess my instincts were telling me to go in so I did.
There was already someone here, but was gone, there was an unlighted camp fire, and a few bottles on the ground.
Suddenly a zap of fire landed on the wood and boom a fire.
It wasn't me or onslaught, we both looked behind us.
"this is my place brotha *hiccup" He sounded drunk and look like he was irish. "hello, my name is legend" I speak. "If you don't get out out I w- *hiccup* show you a li'l demonstrashun of what I c- *hiccup* do."
I was gonna leave then he speaks.. "Wait partner, are *hiccup* you Legend, as in LEGEND beast?" he asks, "yeah why?" I reply
"No you can stay! Welcome sir! My naMe Is ScOtT, * hiccup*, If you dint notice, I got some ability of creating fire out my hands borTHa." Wow he's cool I could travel with him..
"Say could help me on my journey?" I ask..
"Of course finally I'm useful! yes lets leave now!" He answers Happily.

He climbs on my dragon, I climb too.
"lets go" I say. Onslaught flies! "WOOHOOOO!!!" goes scott.!

"Where exactly are we going?" Scott asked.
"Getting new friends. I have an old friend named Nater." I replied while trying to guide onslaught towards North Gate.

North gate is the place where you can find strong warriors. People who are willing to go against the king.

"Okay sir let's hurry on then!" He shouts because of the raging wind slamming into us with speed. I pat onslaught and there we go, zooming out of the clouds.

We finally arrive there after a day of flying.
We go inside North Gate. The town is called North Gate because the place defended the north from dragons, my father is here...
... I hope I get to see him.

Separated by war. The world could do way better without war.

"Hey! Hold on, Legend, you're famous here." Someone says behind me, Scott went to a bar. Probably to drink, though he said he was gonna find willing warriors. (doubt it)

"Nater!" I shout!

Then he swings his swords at me! I block it. He uses two and is great at it. "I heard you're looking for warriors!" He shouts while fighting me.

Sparks fly out as our swords swing around. Nater and I were trained under the Prince of the palace in armor kingdom.
"Prove I can fight with you!" He shouts. "You too then!" I reply.

Swing mine downwards, He jumps, wind follows him up in the air, he starts to fall fast with his swords about to hit me. I flash out'ta there real fast then apear behind him as he lands and stick my sword out his neck.
"Okay you win." He smiles. "Yup." I smile too.

Back in the forests. Knight was with Xcal, they were walking. "Guys, I heard that legend is finding new guys to fight with him, but dunno where" A guard tell them.
"North gate" Knight says in a serious way. "Were going there"

-The final Part-

We gathered a whole rebellion team against the king, oh and about vinster, he got trapped in a whole ultimate sword story witch ended up being the death of him.
We were preparing to charge towards the castle walls.
Now we have, Scot the fire magician (drunk too), Nater the swords man with the ten deadliest warriors, the dragon rebellion with sloth, and the last hundred of the rebellions of vinsters village.
And we also managed to gather the south warriors to help us.
And my father Myth Beast. He was the only person in Armor kingdom to escape the jail and help over a thousand of the rebellions that are gonna help win this, I hope.

It's night, and cold with snow smashing on us, the advantage is that when it's storming at night, guards are forced to go home.
Also we wore white suits and armor to bland in with the snow.
I also helped plan this out with the leaders, I know that the guards are worst in the cruel, cold snow.

"Legend, the signal, remember" Myth says, my father.
Our catapult was the signal, it will launch a flaming ball into the castle and blow the wall big enough for a load of us to get it.

It shoots, we all charge and we see the wall fall and crash in the snow. "FOR HONOR" shouts nater and Knight.
I charge at the front.
suddenly bullets start falling like rain at us, Darnit, they were ready! We go in and start fighting like crazy.
the snow turned dark read in the white moon, blood flying, there was so much on my face.
The AG kingdom massacre.
"legend, I will go to the towers and stop the gunners!" shouts My dad.

He starts running and fighting through the crowd and killing, stabbing, slashing, he block and strikes.

I start running towards, these two familiar warriors.
"hey, It's you guys who framed me!" I shout!
They charge and I strike I miss I feel a stab. I feel another through my chest, I breathe heavily.
"Run, kni....knight" I say.

I see my dad, he's running back towards me with tears, the suddenly surrounded with gunners, My expression on my face grew dim and dying, My dad shouts and charges, pulls his guns out and fires at all of them...

"Even if we die, my son I love you" he says...

... they fire back, he gets shot in the chest a load of times then in the stomach... After the rebels get slaughtered, sloth gets stabbed silver jaw was hit by thirteen ballistas, dies.
Blood of my dad falls on me.
nater trying to get to me get shot in the back then the face.
My eyes get sleepier. I was dying. everyone got shot and stabbed.
My dad watching me die as he is himself, gets shot in the face.

It was the king, he shot him last.
"NOOOOOOOO" I cry, I run with two big wholes in me and miss the shot at the king, suddenly another stab comes at my back through me, into the king.

It was Xcal, behind me, who killed the king.
"LEGEnd, you won't die without purpose, you die in honor." he says.
"though were not alive, Legend, you die in honor. Were a team, and we stick together! Die together!" Suddenly I hear a shot, It hit Xcal. I fall.
We fall, the kingdom falls.
"We... di..d it.... " I say.....

~the end~

SirLegendary
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Sorry guys, some missing part labels, but it's the whole story.

CommanderDude7
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Nice ending a kind of phyrric victory for the king. Reread the whole story over again thanks for putting it toegether. Hope you write another one.

vinster132
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Are you going to make Armor Kingdoms finest 2?

SirLegendary
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There will be a second I promise that

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nice job legend. i could of so swooped in with my mystical lunar powers and helped out though XD i like it. i might do someting like thi soon. ;D

Nater
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Omg. I are so jealous of you. I'm going to kill you and take your story

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

SirLegendary
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Omg. I are so jealous of you. I'm going to kill you and take your story

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!


heheh not a chance, once again, no chance!
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There will be a second I promise that

I'm pretty sure it's already gonna be awesome.
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