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jdoggparty
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I got gimp, and I was just trying out all the filters and things. I rendered a lot too.
http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/9939/jdogg.png

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Peter20
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why are you showing us this you didn't draw it whats the point of this thread

jdoggparty
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Just because I didn't draw it, It doesn't mean it is hard to make. The point of this thread is to get Constructive Criticism so I can get better, and so you guys can look at pictures.

Cenere
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You still need to cite your sources.

Colours are off, not only in the text that is unreadable, but also in the foreground to background setting.
The blurredness of the car is degrading the image a lot, as it simply looses focus. The flag or what it is, that is sharp simply catches all the attention, which subtracts from the image as well.

And something else, you probably should disregard: The highlight =/= explosion. The car looks very sticked in.

Hopefully it either helps or is ignored.

jdoggparty
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I can't ignore it now.
I can't find them anymore, but from now on I will cite my sources.
Thanks for the tips.

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Imma bad drawer...

jdoggparty
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Another one
http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/343/planesig.png
Plane Render

jdoggparty
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Banner for a Collab
http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/3574/centeredorigincollab.png

jdoggparty
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No, I was just jazzing up the flame of the missile. xD whoops.

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Trying text effects.
http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/5151/clifftributecollab.png
http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/1939/clifftribute2.png

Cenere
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The plane one was rather well done.

As for the text effect ones... The better result is the latter one, but I don't find them to be really fitting for the banners. The top one should have a switch of colours at least, the latter... Idk, something else.
I am not sure how much this is helping > >

jdoggparty
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I'm confused on what your saying..
Thanks about the plane

Cenere
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Basically that with the backgrounds you have used, the text looks out of place. Top one mainly because the "shadow side" is on the wrong side (switching the colours would help), the latter one looks like it has a shadow in empty space.

jdoggparty
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Oh, I should have considered that xD I was just trying them out recklessly. The shadow side should be on the right, because the sun is on the left.
It would have worked better if I didn't show a sun... Then it wouldn't matter.

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The flag or what it is, that is sharp simply catches all the attention, which subtracts from the image as well.


Sow how come look at it twice times didn't even see the flag. read that post and checked if there was a flag?
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