Year 4014. The world is now full of zombies. Liara was a alien and she and her marsian soldiars ran back to there ship. It was a successful attack destroying basic zombie infantry. They succesfully reached her ship "Old Glory". It had got that name because it was always on the front lines of the battles. Now one little zombie boarded the ship. That would start the diease of all the aliens turning into zombies. A calmness seized the ship and everyone felt a sense of relief. Liara headed to her cabin, ready to retire to her bed, when all of a sudden she heard a terrifying scream. Red Sirens turned off, and chaos emitted the ship. Liara ran to the ships bridge, dodging zombies, and shooting them with plasma rifles. Liara just managed to squeeze through the emergency doors, when she noticed The rear gunman, who was covered in bite marks and bruises jumped up and viciously attacked one of the crew members. "Get the escape pods ready!" Liara said. "Yes mam" said the co-pilot. "The zombies are messing with the engine!" A gunman said. "Well fix it!"Said Liara "We cant we will die in the heat" The gunman said. "Okay theres a planet below, ready the escape pods!" Liara said. They got into a escape pod and went down to the planet below. They felt a big shake. The escape pod landed at the planet...
Great story... You have some details, but I think you should have more. Oh and your so called story... Is it supposed to be the script or the story itself? Tell me on the new topic I'm making... It is going to be called... Well just look for my name and search it. Later "
Liara looked around. It was all flat,dry,desert land. There was some ruins ahead. They were brown like the land. She thought for a moment about what she was gonna do here. Liara was on the planet with a rear gunman and the pilot. She had her plasma rifle with her and the gunman had a assult rifle. "Well" said the pilot. "Ill I needed was a little time!" Liara said. "It was like a dream, all the rear gunman turned into zombies" said the gunman. "Corporal Ryan Jackson" said Liara. "Yes" said the pilot. "Lets go ahead" Liara said. "Okay" Ryan said. As they walked toward the ruins, they were attacked by a small wave of zombies. "Fire at will!" said Liara. They fired until they were gone. "Damn, Im out of ammo" said Ryan. "There might be ammo ahead." the pilot said. As they walked and walked and walked, they finally found the ruins. "Lets set up camp here" said Liara. "Agreed" said Ryan. "Yes I found ammo"said Ryan. "Good" said Liara. "Camp" the pilot said. Thats when all hell broke lose...
----------------Chapter 1: A Sucessful Attack--------------- Year 4014. The world is now full of zombies. Liara was a alien and she and her marsian soldiars ran back to there ship. It was a successful attack destroying basic zombie infantry. They succesfully reached her ship "Old Glory". It had got that name because it was always on the front lines of the battles. Now one little zombie boarded the ship. That would start the diease of all the aliens turning into zombies. A calmness seized the ship and everyone felt a sense of relief. Liara headed to her cabin, ready to retire to her bed, when all of a sudden she heard a terrifying scream. Red Sirens turned off, and chaos emitted the ship. Liara ran to the ships bridge, dodging zombies, and shooting them with plasma rifles. Liara just managed to squeeze through the emergency doors, when she noticed The rear gunman, who was covered in bite marks and bruises jumped up and viciously attacked one of the crew members. "Get the escape pods ready!" Liara said. "Yes mam" said the co-pilot. "The zombies are messing with the engine!" A gunman said. "Well fix it!"Said Liara "We cant we will die in the heat" The gunman said. "Okay theres a planet below, ready the escape pods!" Liara said. They got into a escape pod and went down to the planet below. They felt a big shake. The escape pod landed at the planet...
-----------------------Chapter 3: The Landing--------------- Liara looked around. It was all flat,dry,desert land. There was some ruins ahead. They were brown like the land. She thought for a moment about what she was gonna do here. Liara was on the planet with a rear gunman and the pilot. She had her plasma rifle with her and the gunman had a assult rifle. "Well" said the pilot. "Ill I needed was a little time!" Liara said. "It was like a dream, all the rear gunman turned into zombies" said the gunman. "Corporal Ryan Jackson" said Liara. "Yes" said the pilot. "Lets go ahead" Liara said. "Okay" Ryan said. As they walked toward the ruins, they were attacked by a small wave of zombies. "Fire at will!" said Liara. They fired until they were gone. "****, Im out of ammo" said Ryan. "There might be ammo ahead." the pilot said. As they walked and walked and walked, they finally found the ruins. "Lets set up camp here" said Liara. "Agreed" said Ryan. "Yes I found ammo"said Ryan. "Good" said Liara. "Camp" the pilot said. Thats when all hell broke lose... ------------------------------------------------------------ Thats the story so far. I hope you like it
That was good! I liked the dialogue of the next part, and it was alot more discriptive. I think you should describe the landing though. Other then that it was really great!
"Intruder" A voice said. "Who is it?" Commander Darien of the Zombies said. "Liara" the voice said. "Let me do a DNA test" the voice said. "Okay and hurry up" Darien said. "Liara is a alien" the voice said. "I know that!" Darien said. "Okay" the voice said.
Darien slammed the hologram to the ground. He picked up a assult rifle. He then put his armor on and clinged his weapon to his side. He ran out of the room. As he was running, he saw something behind his ship.
"Rear gunman, fire!" Darien said.
He could hear pelet shells from the guns rip across the tile floor. He was now satisfied. "This girl Liara will know nothing when I get ahold of her!" he said to himself. He then laughed evilly and slammed his chamber door shut.
As Liara was stranded on the planet of dust, she had a lot of time to think. She could see nothing in the distance of the dust. She had a pack of ammo left and she needed to be very smart to know how to spend it. Then in the distance she could see dust spreading like a cloud.
"Get ready" she said.
Her mind was racing. Who could that be? Sure she was attacked by a wave of zombies, but how was it reproduceing? She thought for a moment of silence. She looked over to see the pilot and Ryan but she saw the pilot and Ryan dead. There must have been snipers hiding in the dust. She laid down and army crawled to a part in the ruins. She saw him. She now had a clear shot on his head. She fired. She saw the body turn over lifelessly and ran and took the last ammo from the pilot and Ryan. She wondered if she was the only one on the planet now. Then right there, she saw a wave of soldiars coming. She had no choice but to surrender.
