Well, i see a lot of people are doing this so I'll give it a go. Hope you guys like all the things I'll be posting. Please comment and feel free to drop on in at my profile!!! Okay, heres my first one.
"While I sleep"
The moon is high tonight while in a constant fight With the sun always rising then day into night.
As i lay here in bed dreams haunt my every thought Zed break down my doors and leave me here to rot.
This is a harsh world we live in always in fear But what should I be afraid of? when friends and family are near.
I lay here sleeping mellow and content As my eyes slowly close, and my heart beat desends, I know that I have you And the world will never end ________________________________
Thats it. Well, I probably wont ever post any I did for a contest. These will all be from my just writing. Well, once again, please comment and hope you liked it!
There is a lot of emotion put into that poem, I personally feel. How long did that take you to write? Well, just to let you know, I really enjoyed it. I hope you post more soon!
It is morning A day that makes us hope As my gaze fixes away My eyes turn and seem to wonder Just where it goes Everyday
It is noon To remember my high points in life As my brain stirs and thinks away My eyes are closed and seem to imagine Just where it goes Everyday
It is dusk A dark time indeed As the sun sets away I breath a sigh of relief And i just simply wonder Just where this world goes Everyday _______________________________
The rain comes down Drip Drop Over our roof And falls onto the ground.
Why does this sadden me when i know what will come? Beutilfull little flowers And the bees that will hum. Over trees and under land the moist ground full of mud And when i come outside I will see Tiny, little buds. ____________________________________________________
Thanks. took me about 10 minutes.... wasn't really paying attention to it though. Please comment!
Ooh, you're going to be popular! I feel! I love your poems, they're so moving and have so much feeling! It makes me fly away until I experience the poem for real! Keep it up!
This is great! I like the way you make the flame seem special. I like the way you contrast it against what most people view fire as: dangerous. Instead, you make it as if it is enjoyable, something beautiful. Well done!
The man in the heart is a wise one But also plays tricks on your mind Unreasunable decisions and choices Will make your body ache Will make you cry in vain Longing for the one you love Never to come again.
I feel at peace in slumber. Illusion comes before my eyes in that moment. The landscape shudders in my presence. Imagination overides the world I am held in, with riches beyond happiness. Suddenly,my joys are filled seeing the ones I love once more before they leave me with sorrow to take place in my heart from their depart. I plunge in darkness and awake from fear. I glance around seeing the truth. Here in reality I am at peace for your dreams can over whelm you in the worst of ways.
Probably amatuerish compared to the Blue Flame and/or The Man in the Heart.
