ForumsArt, Music, and WritingJacksonghuntington's little poetry thread

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jacksonghuntington
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Well, i see a lot of people are doing this so I'll give it a go. Hope you guys like all the things I'll be posting. Please comment and feel free to drop on in at my profile!!! Okay, heres my first one.

"While I sleep"

The moon is high tonight
while in a constant fight
With the sun always rising
then day into night.

As i lay here in bed
dreams haunt my every thought
Zed break down my doors
and leave me here to rot.

This is a harsh world we live in
always in fear
But what should I be afraid of?
when friends and family are near.

I lay here sleeping
mellow and content
As my eyes slowly close,
and my heart beat desends,
I know that I have you
And the world will never end
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Thats it. Well, I probably wont ever post any I did for a contest. These will all be from my just writing. Well, once again, please comment and hope you liked it!

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elshobokshy
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Not bad not bad

jacksonghuntington
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I do like it, it's more of a story almost, maybe very creative writing, almost a setting of a seen. I really like it and encourage you to make your own thread to post your work. Please dont post things
On others threads.

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