I want a poem thread. I already have a haiku thread, soo... Anyway, this is my poem thread. And no, unless you have specific permission from me to post your own poems, I'd rather you didn't. Only comments. Only VIPs get to post their poems on my thread here.
Here's my first poem. Please tell me what you think.
The Most Complicated Emotion at its Best 05/02/11
Terrible storms of wrath, out bursts a sudden laugh, tumultuous cries of pain, a hard put struggle for whats left, a path to peace instead of self gain, this is the most complicated emotion at its best.
Strong raptures of passion, intermittent effects that are lasting, inexpressible desires, a resolution that never tires, powerful enough to bend a nation, at times calm, at times patient, when put to the test, this is the most complicated emotion at its best.
Resolutions incorruptible even unto death, this is the most complicated emotion at its best!
I'm sorry? I guess I could tell you what this emotion is. You may not agree though. It's love. And no, this isn't the first of this style. I used to write lots of poems when I was much younger.
Once upon a time If everyone was sad, I'd what I could, But could I fix this? If everyone was mad, I know what I should, But can I stand this? Once upon a time No one was mad No one was sad Once upon a time People were happy People were lucky Once upon a time I could have made this rhyme.
Thank you so much Shelly sis. It's supposed to be confusing. Btw, I meant to say, I'd do what I could, not, I'd what I could. Accident! Here's a short one:
He was looking into my eyes, His own seemed so wise. He was holding my hand, His own seemed so worn, He helped me to understand, He himself was so torn. But we made it through, even to the end he was true. This is our ode, This is to us, This is our code, This is how we trust.
