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bobber24LIO
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make a rap...remember 2 make them ryhme

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bobber24LIO
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bobber24LIO
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Nomad

ey yo monkey are u writin the first verse

inferedmonkey
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inferedmonkey
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You can write the first verse... make it about yourself.

bobber24LIO
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ight here goes tell me wat u think

we all knew that kid who just wanted 2 be cool
in 2nd grade he brought a pocket knife 2 school
got a day of detion
but still no attiention
now hes an 8th grader
and hes not a hater
but he doesnt care if hes cool or not
he doesnt care if hes hot
hes got friends that are rare
hes got friends that care
everybody wants to be cool
but dont be a fool
this kid is me
and im exactly how i wanna be
im cool in my own ways
even on bad days
and i might be i lil funcky
but its time to listen to my friend inferedmonkey!

inferedmonkey
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inferedmonkey
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Peasant

alright give me a sec.

inferedmonkey
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inferedmonkey
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Alright check it.

Hey man thanks for the intro
Introducing us to a side we don't know
but its my turn now
From me to show
a new side of me so here i go.
I'm not that cool in school
but im not a punk of a tool
I got that education to a standard of which most thingy is nerdy
Cause my versers never worsen and always seem so wordy
Best in football and not afraid to get dirty
you can try all you want but your never gonna hurt me.
and what a coincidence im in 8th grade to
I guess i got that in commen with you
But ive had my turn and my fun
its time to turn it over to (whoever raps next) now that im done.

bobber24LIO
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Nomad

that was dope...zakyman is next up...if he doesnt take the next verse ill try and come up with another thing

BladeBreaker
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Nomad

This is interesting. May I partake gentle sirs?

zakyman
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Bob, you thought I was gonna leave you to hang?
Dude, without my rap there would be no rhythm to bang!
I'm the one in this group who knows how to rap,
And unlike many today this ain't regurgitated bird pap.
I guess y'all want to know my sob story
Well, I'll tell you, it's boring.
I don't have any troubles,
My girl is steady,
But when it comes time to learn, I'm always ready!
I'm the top of the class, GPA 4.25
It's so good, it makes you wanna jive,
and I'm, on the JV tennis team,
My serve's like a diamond, it always gleams!

BladeBreaker, show us what you've got!

bobber24LIO
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yeah go ahead bladebird take you verse

Maverick4
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Thanks for asking, 'cause I'm doing mighty fine.
Livin' it up down here in Caroline.

But don't get confused, 'cause my girl's named Virginia.
I'll shoot half the hood, then I'll blame it all on ya.

My rhymes and my moves are fresh, just like a lemon.
And before you know it I'll have stolen all your women.

My hoe's have got 36D's, I do as I please.
Raking in cash with ease, rolling in slease.

So face it holmes, you've already hit your peak;
'Cause truth o' the matter is that I'm booked through next week.

BladeBreaker
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Sorry i took so long to respond, but life has dawned. On the wrong foot, caught, a pawn in my own plot, fallen and forgot, the stencil wrought. just tracing the lines til I find the spot, in my prime, hit this rhyme with all that I've got. Dot to dot, in time we'll rot, but not for naught. Take a chance play the slots. Make the world your own game, through broken lanes still hope remains, an open range, toke the train like you smoked the flames, stoked it, now stroke the mane. Stand up and be the lion fighting, put pride in owning the plains. (sorry about the lack of spacing, i can't skip lines on my phone)

loomer50
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You might think that i don't have the skills to rap like a winner
But i will rap so fast it makes you look like a beginner
I will crown myself the champion, just because i am the best
And don't argue, caause you are standing last
try to beat me but forgive me if i get involved
Because your raps sound sso boring you seem pretty old
i've been throwing out insults left and right but for myself
Because this will be another trophy, right for on my shelf

bobber24LIO
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if u want to start doing diss raps then make a differant forum and if u do then i probably comment on it

Alexistigerspice
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Hey all you G's my name is Alexis
I'm part of a clan thats against being sexist.
My name is cool like a cube of ice,
And I dont like chinese food except for rice.
Its not cool to make raps just to diss
So mine is awesome, but you know this.

WORD TO YOUR MOTHER

crazyape
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f you were to die tonight
Who would care?
Would tears be shed
Of joy and delight?
If you were to die tomorrow
Who would care?
Would tears be shed
Of pain or sorrow?
What horrors of the night
Will take you
Will shatter you
With unspeakable fright?
What freakish partakers
Of ghoulish delight
Would dance to this tune
Of the hipo-cryt?
Tell me now
Tell me loud
Who would avow
To sew your death shroud?
What have you
To say to me?
That your death'
Is far from view?

Watch your step, foo!

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