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loloynage2
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Little saga by me....maybe not that good...

btw...this is not the real beginning of AG

I will post my first story (i already made it) just after TSL3_needed confirms about the story, b/c i have a feeling this is going to be like The Spam War....so yea...

btw....if you want to be in the story....just post here...b/c this is the beginning of AG, u most at less be iron Lord or higher...or have bean in AG for more then 7 months...

Story coming soon....i hope

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dudeguy45
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Don't be pushy about it. It's Lolo's work and he'll do what he pleases with the story. Besides, you've been mentioned before.


I'm not gonna say that was a joke. Me and lolo are cool. We can insult each other.


Hey lolo, your ugly.


See?
loloynage2
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Nice chapter. Again, WORK ON YOUR GRAMMAR & SPELLING. Okay? Other than that, keep it up.


What do you mean? I corrected most of them.

Hey lolo, your ugly.


lol

Don't be pushy about it. It's Lolo's work and he'll do what he pleases with the story. Besides, you've been mentioned before.


Its k
goumas13
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It's a good story a bit too laconic, but captivating and intriguing.
Not bad it's hard to keep up with the stories, so good luck with it!

loloynage2
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It's a good story a bit too laconic,


I noticed myself, but i'm not good whit the big words, and sentences....

Not bad it's hard to keep up with the stories, so good luck with it!


yea, its killing my laziness, but i think i am one of the only ones who made it this far whit out dropping out....
goumas13
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I noticed myself, but i'm not good whit the big words, and sentences....

Better avoiding words you don't know well, so I don't see any problem with it. You are not a lecturer.
but i think i am one of the only ones who made it this far whit out dropping out....

You have good chances of making a record.
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lol good job

GuitarHeroFtw
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you forgot about how the entire armorgames franchise is ran by mentally challenged monkeys named fredrick and bob

loloynage2
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lol good job


thanx

you forgot about how the entire armorgames franchise is ran by mentally challenged monkeys named fredrick and bob


...what?
loloynage2
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*whistles a tune while waiting for the next chapter*


Next chapter is not coming before my school starts, but i am making a extra, and i already completed half of it. Extra is coming tomorrow.
loloynage2
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The begginning of AG Extra 2

Zlith's Story

Zlith was a poor 16 year old guy, and to try to get money for his family, he always gets part time jobs. One day he chose to register as gardien of a caravan full of gold. He though it would be a nice job, and he also gets really well paid. It was hard to find something that gives you a lot of money, wean you are just a cerf. The caravan was moving well until AG soldiers attacked the caravan. Zlith was the only survivor. He woke up in a strange place. Whit a guy called Grama. He told Zlith that he was in AG head-castle. Zlith though the ennemy wanted harm, but they actually wanted peace. A guy called Ernie told him to join AG...


Next chapter is a special. It will be a lot longer.

GuitarHeroFtw
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Nice work, i've only read the one above me though, i has no time to read all of them ahha

loloynage2
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Nice work, i've only read the one above me though, i has no time to read all of them ahha


Its not the true story, but thanx
FishyDragon
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It's a great story so far!

Graham
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Whit a guy called Grama


wait.... i'm a grandma? T_T
parrot657
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wait.... i'm a grandma? T_T

lol. btw, great stories . I wish I could enter but I don't have the requirements, oh the wellz... when's next chapter coming?
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