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loloynage2
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Little saga by me....maybe not that good...

btw...this is not the real beginning of AG

I will post my first story (i already made it) just after TSL3_needed confirms about the story, b/c i have a feeling this is going to be like The Spam War....so yea...

btw....if you want to be in the story....just post here...b/c this is the beginning of AG, u most at less be iron Lord or higher...or have bean in AG for more then 7 months...

Story coming soon....i hope

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Danstanta
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Oh oh oh oh me next, and of course ive been here for awwhileeee!

loloynage2
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Ummm.... I'm a prince....


ummm....this is before. Its like long ago....so everyone is lower rank.

I have an idea, me and BigP08 are in a battle with atheists and we need some help because we are outnumbered and then someone starts picking people off with arrows, attacking both groups :/ VoteSocialist? lol


lol xD But that doesn't make sense to my story....still good story line through.

What?! I'm an actual manta ray?! I'm supposed to be a kick-arse aquatic kickboxer!


ummmm....oh....ummmm....yea....

Bah... it's a good story, but you REALLY need to work on your spelling and grammar.


Wil tri.


K, so nao i have lots of people asking, so here is a list of people that will probably go in my story. The top ones asked first, so they go in first....

-ferary
-pauler94
-Kirby998
-Danstanta

k maybe not that much
17dman
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If its not late can I be in Ive been around here for about a year

loloynage2
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If its not late can I be in Ive been around here for about a year


Sure, its not to late....
Green12324
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xD I like it. And awesomeness, I get to be a knight with a sword. After we get the gold I think I'll go and visit the little cobblestone house under the bridge where the trolls live =D

Chainy
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I heard a rumour Hitler created this website.

CosmicCharlie
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that was just below the belt, kirby. I think I'm gonna have to report you.

loloynage2
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I heard a rumour Hitler created this website.


Oh really? I didn't now it was that old...
loloynage2
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Hey are you still writing the story?


Yes, but sry for not righting the next part. I was on camping vacation. Next chapter tomorrow....
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The beginning of AG part 4

''What preposition?'' Asked Zlith

''You to join us.'' Said Ernie15

''Why me?''

''Because your skills are amazing for your level.''

''I will NEVER!!!''

''Then you will have to die...''

''I'm not scared of you!''

Zlith runs to Ernie, but Enerie defended himself whit only one hand.

''Join us! You will see that AG is the true power!''

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Green, sam, lolo, the manta, and Green's grasshopper were on they way to AG land. Its been 2 hours. But they already made it far, b/c of the rapid speed of the Manta. Everything turn out well until a huge mountain blocked the way.

''How are we going to get passed?'' Asked sam.

''Hmmmm...let me think'' Said Green.

''I know!''

''Was that you lolo?'' Asked Green by looking at lolo.

''No i did say anything'' Said lolo confused.

''Same here.'' Said sam.

''Then who was it?''

''It was me! Down here!''

The 3 people looked at the manta.

''AHHHHHHH!!!! It can talk!'' Said all three of them.

''Yes i can. I am kinda different, but lets go back to the rock problem. Get on my back!''

Green's grasshopper was the first one to go on manta's back, then Green, and then lolo. Sam didn't want to, but at the end went on his back too. Suddenly the manta was going at a very fast speed. The fastest at that time, known to men. The manta "ran" over the whole mountain, and stopped at the other side.

''Wow'' Said Green.

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''They past the mountain, they can't go any longer! Go kills them!''

''Yes my master.''

''And remember to come back wean the signal will start.''

''Of course my master.''


To be continued....

Author's Notes:

Kirby is in. I just didn't put your name. You are still a mysterious figure =D
Go check out my RPG of this story too, its on my profile. Other characters are going to appear, its really hard to put all of you people. But i am trying my best.

pauler94
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Pauler94 is still on the waiting list, I guess. I'll be patient.

loloynage2
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Pauler94 is still on the waiting list, I guess. I'll be patient.


Don't worry, you will be on.
dudeguy45
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Not mentioned.....

loloynage2
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Not mentioned.....


You? You are in the other ones....and maybe this one. Who knows....
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Not mentioned.....


Don't be pushy about it. It's Lolo's work and he'll do what he pleases with the story. Besides, you've been mentioned before.

Nice chapter. Again, WORK ON YOUR GRAMMAR & SPELLING. Okay? Other than that, keep it up.
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