"Why are you following me?!" She exclaimed. "You look like a... tasty time." He said with an evil chuckle. "What are you..."She begs. "Just a hungry bystander." He says as he comes closer. "Why me, ... Why me?" She says as her life slowly and painfuly comes to an end. _______________________________________
When you think about life. What do you think of? Do you see a world where things are possible? A bright future? Or do you see a world where we are all in chaos? Every man for himself? If you think of the first one, stop reading this right now. Just exit out, and never think of this again. Go live your happy life. But if you chose the second one, ... well, you might be able to keep reading. This is My world. The bad world you might say. You could think this is a fantasy. But it is real. You just need to open you eyes. This is a world where every step you take, someone might kill you. If you are to survive, You have to know about everyone. I will tell you about a few if you want to know. The few that are okay to be around, are the fairies, a few of the elves, maybe a demon or two, some of the wolves. But I don't know of any vampires that are good. Besides my self that is.
The fairies have many classifacations, but that would take a while. The Elves.... are playful you could say. But they are dangerous if you piss them off. Demons.... oh the demons... The ones that are okay, are the money hungry ones. They are the ones that will do anything for money, and don't care if a human is the one that gives the payment. You just have to make the highest offer. The wolves are nice you could say. If they realize that you are better in combat, they will be good. But the vampires... Pure evil. I have never met on that isn't. I am not saying it isn't possible, but I havne't met any. Ever. And I have been here for quite some time.
I haven't introduced my self have I? Well then. I will give you my name. But not right now.
You see, I am a book in the making, and my author is thinking about these certain things, like names and such. If you would like to be in the book, I think you should get to know my author and she might add you. my author is MoonFairy. Did you know that in my book there are Moon Fairies? Yep. There are. Anyways. My author is really awesome, and would like it if you posted a comment or two on what you think of me so far. If you do, She might finish my chapter! Do you know how happy that would make me?!?!?! I WANT MY CHAPTER TO BE FINISHED. YOU BETTER COMMENT OR ELSE I WILL FIND YOU AND HAUNT YOU AS THE CHAPTER NEVER FINISHED! Okay yeah so you don't want that do you? DO YOU?! Okay then. Comment and my author will think I am important enough to finish! Please?! I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER! Thank you!
Um, I'm kind of confused, becasuse I don't know which is the actual story, the first little bit before all the paragraphs or the whole thing. The first part of the first paragraph sounds like the beginnings of the books in the Series Of Unfortunate Events. I am trying to imagine the elves,demons, and fairies, but you haven't described what they look like. As the setting, I don't know where it is, is it on earth, or some distant planet? And do the different creatures have villages or travel in clans? Yes, I think you should continue the story, with a little more clarity and explinations, it could be awesome!
These are just some of my opinions. Hope they help!
It was just an idea that I posted on here to see if anyone liked it, so I didn't bother with detail. But now that I see that a few people would possibly read it, I will add on a bit later. And yeah, I stole the beginning from Lemony Snicket. XD No one else writes like him that I have heard of, and his books are addicting. And I just got bored with the topic after thinking about what I could type in here and just left the first part up then typed all of the "my author will finish me" stuff as a plot to get people to comment if they bothered to read. I don't know about you guys, but I thought it was pretty funny :P Then again, I may just be lame T_T SPOILER ALERT SPOILER ALERT "She" in the beginning is the person talking throught the whole story. The main character. The vampire with sanity.
Now you can read if you didn't read the spoiler, which I am sure most of you did... I haven't decided a name yet. Maybe Emily?!?! Thats my real name lol. But I am not that selfish am I? And If you give me your names I will add you in the story. @kingryan, yes. My vampires will be what they were supposed to be. The allergies to garlic, crosses-will-kill-us, sunlight-haters. Except that the people who use magic befriended the main character and blessed her with the power to walk during the day, with slight irritation of course. She can't stay out too long or else she is fried. I will throw this topic around some more in my head and see if I can come up with anything else. I might post some more later today or tonight.
Thank you all 3 of you for actually reading my idea! I really appreciate it! I would do likewise if any of you had any stories in progress. Just drop me a comment on my profile and I will run to the forums! Thanks again!
As long is there is no sun sparkling, vegetarianism I don't really mind, I grew into my teens with the vampires that wouldn't hesitate to tear your throat and drink your blood no matter your age or size... AKA Dracula and Blade.
lol i agree with moonfairy. anyways. so we can be in the book if we give you names maybe? ^_^ If so then can there be an Elijah... just wondering out of curiosity... lol Xd hope to see next update. as long as you don't kill any deer this seems a good book XD gl with it all
Well, I can give you my name, but unless you give us some concrete writting like a whole chapter, I can't really tell you anything... I guess you're going for a fantastic genre...Well, it's one of the easiest style to dawdle with so it's pretty good for people who want to start in writting. I'd be glad to post the little essay I wrote recently for a contest here but it's in French, it's a realistic/surrealistc text on modernity and society flaws. If you come up with a paragraph or two it'll be my pleasure to read them, although I may not be in a well enough position to criticize them given the fact the English is only my second tongue. I've given up on fantastic litterature years ago but for somebody who wants his work rated, I'll be glad to read^^. Put aside Castlevania games and the fact that I used to listen to buffy the vampire slayer in my youth, I don't really have any interest in vampires, heck! I didn't even see twilight! But if you can bring out some innovative sides to vampires, like the aforementionned fact that your character can sustain a little daylight, it might prove to be interesting, anyways, keep up the writting moonfairy. See you on the poetry threads! - I had quite a scare when I realized that it was a book speaking...At first I thought he would ZETTA BEAM me...or maybe MOON BEAM me. -To all Makai kindgom players ^^.
That seems like a horror book, If you ask for my opinion, But all I can really say is that I really must read that first chapter, if it comes out. This looks like a great book.
I always wondered how would a book be if every Armorgamer could join it. Here's one, and this one is interesting.
