"Why are you following me?!" She exclaimed. "You look like a... tasty time." He said with an evil chuckle. "What are you..."She begs. "Just a hungry bystander." He says as he comes closer. "Why me, ... Why me?" She says as her life slowly and painfuly comes to an end. _______________________________________
When you think about life. What do you think of? Do you see a world where things are possible? A bright future? Or do you see a world where we are all in chaos? Every man for himself? If you think of the first one, stop reading this right now. Just exit out, and never think of this again. Go live your happy life. But if you chose the second one, ... well, you might be able to keep reading. This is My world. The bad world you might say. You could think this is a fantasy. But it is real. You just need to open you eyes. This is a world where every step you take, someone might kill you. If you are to survive, You have to know about everyone. I will tell you about a few if you want to know. The few that are okay to be around, are the fairies, a few of the elves, maybe a demon or two, some of the wolves. But I don't know of any vampires that are good. Besides my self that is.
The fairies have many classifacations, but that would take a while. The Elves.... are playful you could say. But they are dangerous if you piss them off. Demons.... oh the demons... The ones that are okay, are the money hungry ones. They are the ones that will do anything for money, and don't care if a human is the one that gives the payment. You just have to make the highest offer. The wolves are nice you could say. If they realize that you are better in combat, they will be good. But the vampires... Pure evil. I have never met on that isn't. I am not saying it isn't possible, but I havne't met any. Ever. And I have been here for quite some time.
I haven't introduced my self have I? Well then. I will give you my name. But not right now.
You see, I am a book in the making, and my author is thinking about these certain things, like names and such. If you would like to be in the book, I think you should get to know my author and she might add you. my author is MoonFairy. Did you know that in my book there are Moon Fairies? Yep. There are. Anyways. My author is really awesome, and would like it if you posted a comment or two on what you think of me so far. If you do, She might finish my chapter! Do you know how happy that would make me?!?!?! I WANT MY CHAPTER TO BE FINISHED. YOU BETTER COMMENT OR ELSE I WILL FIND YOU AND HAUNT YOU AS THE CHAPTER NEVER FINISHED! Okay yeah so you don't want that do you? DO YOU?! Okay then. Comment and my author will think I am important enough to finish! Please?! I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER! Thank you!
I think that in order to be able to write a good book, that everyone will love or hate so much that they love it, you're going to need better grammar. Yes, you have your whole life ahead of you to learn it, but you better start soon. The sooner the better.
The thesaurus and dictionary are (should be) your best friends.
Satsu, given that this is your first time in this thread, this could easily be considered spamming. I strongly advise that you introduce yourself and be a little more constructive next time. Of course I saw your later posts but it could have been interpreted as pretty rude by Moon is she actually was somewhat of a serious person. Now, I'm sure that you didn't want to sound hurtfull, but condescendence won't earn you much friends around here...Besides, there's always a nicer way to say things.
As for the emulator topic, I suggest everyone who wants to inquire themselves about it to visit emuparadise. It's not just about portable consoles, I actually have a Snes, a Ps1 and a n64 emulator on my laptop so yes, I can play OoT EVERYWHERE! *Evil Laugh* Of course I almost all the said consoles except for the N64 so I'm almost legal ^^!
geez. thanks for stickin up for me Fallen But in order for me to take your advice, I would have to see your work, and respect it. Otherwise, no. And you said OVERLY impressed. So i could possibly take that as a compliment. If I was stupid of course. And Fallen, I think you are a weeeeee bit obbsessed.
Isn't it commonly accepted that sometimes people will also say negative things about you? I'm not quite the type to look out for the feelings of random strangers, keeping in mind that this is the internet. Real, fleshy friends would do better for me.
In any case, I didn't mean to spam or be offensive, just said what I initially thought, before reconsidering.
Hey, it's good to have proper manners even on the internet! Besides, you should be glad that I actually stood up for you...Ah by the way, new art is coming on my profile tonight!!! lucky you...just before you go heh...
Well just because it's internet satsu, doesn't give you the right to say anything you want, and besides, I just noted that it COULD be seen as rude given the fact that it was your first post and didn't boast any explication regarding your critic.
I am glad that you did. Thus the Smiley. And it will repeat And I just took it rude cause no one has said anything bad about this story line thingie that I am still trying to bake in my story brain oven. But I don't mind. At least you took the time to read it. AND THAT IS AWESOME. What is it of?
It being the internet gives me the perfect reason to say whatever I want. Give me the same curtsy I would give you and do remember that real life is what matters, not someone's random and apparently very ill placed comment.
Sorry, I'm quite the spirited young lad when it comes down to proper manners and respoect... Anyhow Moon, after all that random stuff, let's get this thread rolling again. So when will you update us with new stories...Will you be working on the elemental story or the most recent one?
