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SirLegendary
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Well after making my poem (witch sucked) I decided to read more (witch I had done) and ask my english teacher to help me in writing things. It's summer here so I met up with him at my school.

Written by LEGEND_beast.
Starring Xcalibur45 And Knight_34

The story of "Armor Kingdoms finest"

PART 1.

This was the time when kings had ruled the kingdom's of their own. The time of sickness
and horrible deeds. The time where greed for gold was far worse than any other time in history.
Here there was battles, not by blood, no weapons but your mind. Arguements were done by discussing
them and asking opinions of the villigers. My name is Legend. I have been here a long time. I'm a duke and a ranker here. See many of us stay as serfs and squires to serve and have a living here.
But a lot of us too, like to fill the castles and the kingdoms and be Lords and more. One example would be an old friend, the 34th Knight. Everyone calls him knight. And another named Ex Cal. nicknamed that for making a bullet that had helped us in a war. But that has been put aside as said.
Yes this is not the perfect place to be exited about. But it's Armor Kingdom, the place where a lot of game to play were invented. And Innovated here.

THAT is the future.

This was when I was a knight years ago...

Horses raged as dragons had stormed through, people were running and all we were doing was waiting for orders. I had been on the ground with my pal were here too. We were running to help then a dragon just fell right infront of us, we did but run! "Throw me a sword!" knight raged out. He had dropped his when fighting an enemy a while back. "I only have one!!!" I screamed back. The dragon was chasing us. I threw a stick at it. Roar went dragon and ate it. Surpirised me and knight were as the dragon did not hesitate to bite it. I turned around to face the beast and had been hit by the dargons claw, hurt I was. I threw my sword to knight and he had scratched the dragon. "THAT'S ALL YOU CAN DO??!!" "You DID NOT EVEN TOUCH HIM!" We screamed at each other. Suddenly a ballista from a higher wall had flung into the dragons body. I saw a club atleast two yards away. Knight was distracting the beast as I desprately tried to reach the club. And again I get, the tail of the dragon land on my face. I grab the club stand, charge torward the dragon, swing it and manage to smack it on the face. Knight runs torwards the dragon with a chance for a good blow on the chest and fails at it. I gaze with my eye twitching as he falls and rolls all over. Suddenly X (Xcalibur45) Had jumped from a tower and knocked the dragon with a raging hammer then shot him crazily. "Knight, don't die!" I cried. "I'm not dead you idiot." he jerks at me, "do I look dead?!" "no.. sorry." Dragon was knocked. We left it there and ran away.

We started to eat in the tavern. People had always disscused about things here. Though after what had just happened barely anyone was here. X was basically a guy with a rifle, sitting with me and knight. "So... us guys, yeah, we killed the dragon huh?" X had started, Knight and I looked at each other. "Of course we slayed it, why do you think it was still breathing huh?" I had blabbered in sarcasm. "So we didn't?" X wondering.. "no, not exactly" Knight replied, smiling in glee.

People started to walk into the tavern and soon it was loaded.

To be continued...
Part two coming up.

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Gantic
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I just deleted some of the posts here. Please keep snippy comments and petty arguments off this thread, this forum, and this site in general.

leo99rules
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*coughs loudly to direct attention to himself*

Nice story me likes, and no I'm not going to ask to be in *cough* since I *cough* don't want to be in.

xD

JK

PICK ME PICK ME. I don't have to be a main character. Maybe I'm a poor guy on the street? You only have to include me in one chapter. Maybe I try to kill you, doesn't matter.

Xcalibur45
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*coughs loudly to direct attention to himself*
Nice story me likes, and no I'm not going to ask to be in *cough* since I *cough* don't want to be in.
xD
JK
PICK ME PICK ME. I don't have to be a main character. Maybe I'm a poor guy on the street? You only have to include me in one chapter. Maybe I try to kill you, doesn't matter.


Ya, why not Add, him. I have an awesome Idea! Every Character should make their history, before now. So people know why we are the way we are.
leo99rules
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Just wondering.

What era is this set in?

Since you fight with swords, but X has a gun?

knight_34
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Fantasy medieval, I presume. More familiar guns were introduced around the Renaissance, though this seems more medieval-ish.

MoonFairy
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Cheese and rice people. It is legends story, let him do what he wants lol

MopedDuck
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well some readers prefer SOME kind of realism to their stories, like if a dude is fighting with a sword and some random dude walks out of nowhere with an AK-47 people probably wouldn't like that book LULZ

Cenere
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well some readers prefer SOME kind of realism to their stories, like if a dude is fighting with a sword and some random dude walks out of nowhere with an AK-47 people probably wouldn't like that book LULZ

Like the people arguing that Voldemort/Harry should have gotten a gun, and left it at that?
And now I really should have read the story at hand to make a proper argument, but otherwise, science fantasy seems to be a genre that would justify it, as long as it seems reasonable to use a sword while the enemies might have guns.
I have a character that sticks stubbornly to swords, and find people who use any kind of long ranged weapons (whether there is an advantage or not) to be cowards, because they are not fighting like men.
SirLegendary
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Guys I am making part six a really big show~!! Nurvana will be a drunk crazy monk and knock out sloth will be fighter with iron gauntlets, lives up to his name.

The next part comes out around tommorow 5 am US time because I live here in the philippines.

vinster132
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Hm...don't you think we characters need a character sheet?

SecretMod
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Nomad

Interesting story. I love the battle scenes, although it confuses me sometimes.

If I was in there what would I be?

A minus serf? Slave?

Nurvana
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Okay but please don't make me corrupt or anything

vinster132
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I kinda thought I was gunna be some drunkin guy who knocks people out lulz,

Lolz, just hanging out in the Kingdom's bar? And drinkin'? Haha...lolz. XD XD XD XD XD And knockin' out peoplez? =D
Xcalibur45
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Just wondering.
What era is this set in?
Since you fight with swords, but X has a gun?


I'm awesome like that, I'm like Mista T. But I could beat down chuck norris in a heartbeat.
MoonFairy
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Updates comin any time soon?

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