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SirLegendary
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Well after making my poem (witch sucked) I decided to read more (witch I had done) and ask my english teacher to help me in writing things. It's summer here so I met up with him at my school.

Written by LEGEND_beast.
Starring Xcalibur45 And Knight_34

The story of "Armor Kingdoms finest"

PART 1.

This was the time when kings had ruled the kingdom's of their own. The time of sickness
and horrible deeds. The time where greed for gold was far worse than any other time in history.
Here there was battles, not by blood, no weapons but your mind. Arguements were done by discussing
them and asking opinions of the villigers. My name is Legend. I have been here a long time. I'm a duke and a ranker here. See many of us stay as serfs and squires to serve and have a living here.
But a lot of us too, like to fill the castles and the kingdoms and be Lords and more. One example would be an old friend, the 34th Knight. Everyone calls him knight. And another named Ex Cal. nicknamed that for making a bullet that had helped us in a war. But that has been put aside as said.
Yes this is not the perfect place to be exited about. But it's Armor Kingdom, the place where a lot of game to play were invented. And Innovated here.

THAT is the future.

This was when I was a knight years ago...

Horses raged as dragons had stormed through, people were running and all we were doing was waiting for orders. I had been on the ground with my pal were here too. We were running to help then a dragon just fell right infront of us, we did but run! "Throw me a sword!" knight raged out. He had dropped his when fighting an enemy a while back. "I only have one!!!" I screamed back. The dragon was chasing us. I threw a stick at it. Roar went dragon and ate it. Surpirised me and knight were as the dragon did not hesitate to bite it. I turned around to face the beast and had been hit by the dargons claw, hurt I was. I threw my sword to knight and he had scratched the dragon. "THAT'S ALL YOU CAN DO??!!" "You DID NOT EVEN TOUCH HIM!" We screamed at each other. Suddenly a ballista from a higher wall had flung into the dragons body. I saw a club atleast two yards away. Knight was distracting the beast as I desprately tried to reach the club. And again I get, the tail of the dragon land on my face. I grab the club stand, charge torward the dragon, swing it and manage to smack it on the face. Knight runs torwards the dragon with a chance for a good blow on the chest and fails at it. I gaze with my eye twitching as he falls and rolls all over. Suddenly X (Xcalibur45) Had jumped from a tower and knocked the dragon with a raging hammer then shot him crazily. "Knight, don't die!" I cried. "I'm not dead you idiot." he jerks at me, "do I look dead?!" "no.. sorry." Dragon was knocked. We left it there and ran away.

We started to eat in the tavern. People had always disscused about things here. Though after what had just happened barely anyone was here. X was basically a guy with a rifle, sitting with me and knight. "So... us guys, yeah, we killed the dragon huh?" X had started, Knight and I looked at each other. "Of course we slayed it, why do you think it was still breathing huh?" I had blabbered in sarcasm. "So we didn't?" X wondering.. "no, not exactly" Knight replied, smiling in glee.

People started to walk into the tavern and soon it was loaded.

To be continued...
Part two coming up.

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vinster132
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He might post it later today. Maybe he delayed it, or got more ideas to add to the part. So, yeah...

Nater
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Can't wait for the next part dude. Good luck!

Holden012
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Can I be in the next part?? Can't wait!

vinster132
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I'm thinking at the next part, would be really long. I saw Legend's comment on someone's profile, saying that he wanted to include "everybody" inside it. I think you'll be in it Holden. =)

Holden012
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Yay , I love being mentioned in stories. I think I might make a story sometime and post it on here... Maybe during the school break then I would have more time on my hands.

Xcalibur45
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Maybe he's got something special planned.

vinster132
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Yeah, maybe. Let's just be patient for now. =)

SirLegendary
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Guys sorry for being late, Thanks for liking the story!
Part 5

Everything was dark... I had no idea where I was.
I here a voice "Legend! Legend wake up!!!" I couldn't tell who it was, judging by the voice I think it was Holden.
"holden?" I speak.. "Yeah buddy wake up!" he shouts back.
Then I see more and more people around me. They all had some kind of thing on there shoulder.
It was shiny wood. With white paint, little picture of a skull.
"Who are those guys?" I ask. "they're my gang.
"hey" "hello" "hi" They all speak.
I get up and look around, it was a house.
I go outside and see a bunch'a dragons... I stare as scared I was. I tried to pull out my knife but it was gone. Darnit!
"Hey, looking for this?" I turn back, "They're our ride so don't do anything stupid."
"Who are you what are they again... ... exactly?" I ask.
"I am knock out sloth, but you can call me sloth. Those are the dragons, we ride em!" Sloth says.
"Uhmmm.. Okay. So sloth, you must be a rider then?" I look at the dragons while speaking. "Get one. Cmon they ain't bad at all!"
I try and climb one then it suddenly flies, Darnit! "it's okay get another that likes you."
They all fly, at this point I look stupid. Then one charges at me and stops, just there. It bows.
It was blue, with one wing made of cloth, must have been ripped out.
He had a mane, with horns sticking out, every part of him was blue. "His name is onslaught." sloth says.
I jump on. He flies and I grab on his horns. When I pulled left he went left, same as right. I guess that was how to control him. I patted him slowly and stroked his blue mane. I loved him.
Then I kicked him like a horse then he went faster! Wow, he was great.

We kept flying then we saw Vinster. Darnit!! I landed in front of him.
"A duel huh?" he asks with evil in his voice. "I guess" I reply.
He blows fire then Onslaught jumps into the air. I softly slap him in the neck then he blows a small ball of blue flames. I get the idea now! I slpa him harder then he shoots so hard vinster's dragon flies away real fast! I chase him!
"can you keep up!"

To be continued.

vinster132
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Lolz, my dragon ought to get back...lolz. I'd thought it'd be long though. Oh well. I'm guessing the final part would be, you "good" guys would find a way to "cure" my "evilness." Lolz. XD XD XD XD XD

Holden012
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Lol , Very Good! Loving these stories I love a good old Medieval Story.

You have a wild imagination, LEGEND. People that have wild imaginations I believe would be great story writers. Great job, keep it up!

SirLegendary
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Evil will come buddy! >

Holden012
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Lawl , Evil will rule the earth !! Mwa haha! >

vinster132
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If I'm the evil person in the story, that means I rule Earth? XD

SirLegendary
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Duke

hmmmm you'll see!

vinster132
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Or the "good guys" turn we good and not evil anymore? Well, I'll see...lolz

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