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Holden012
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Well I am writing a Story ... It's a story based on the war going on in Afghanistan. That's right Soldiers , Tanks and stuff blowing up.

Part 1 Will be coming out later I need some Characters first.

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Holden012
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Thank you people , Thank you!

Holden! HOW DARE YOU FORGET YOU'RE FRIEND SLOTH?!?!?!?

lol.


Well the next story I will make you in it.
OperationNilo
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Can I also be in the Next story?

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Knowing that you Australian your characters better be SAS! haha. Few inacuratcies. The troops shouldnt be useing AK47's, RPG's or the famas and the insergents in Afghanastan dont have tanks but other then that it was fairly good.

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@Operation
Yeah

@BenTheBozer

Thanks , I appreciate the positive feedback I am getting.

Holden012
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I'm using this story for a school assessment.

Changed the names though . Hope it does my Grades good!!

(I used Part 1 and Part 2 ... It's only suppose to be a 400 word essay I went over with 594 words :O hope that earns me better marks.)

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