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Holden012
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Well I am writing a Story ... It's a story based on the war going on in Afghanistan. That's right Soldiers , Tanks and stuff blowing up.

Part 1 Will be coming out later I need some Characters first.

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Kevin4762
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I'm assuming this is a short story. Not anything like an essay or a novel.

Holden012
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Definitely not an essay . Just a short Novel type thing in parts.

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Part 2

In Afghanistan, Asia, October 8, 2001, 16:24 Hours
It's day 2 in Afghanistan, Bravo 24 were at the base campsite when suddenly a call for help on the radio. "We need help, multiple enemies are moving in on our location." It was the scouting squad, Alpha 59. "We will send Bravo 24 to help you out" Replied General Vinster. The General walks over to Bravo 24; they are playing a game of poker. "Boys, Alpha 59 Need help and I have chosen your squad to help them out." General Vinster announced. "What kind of trouble are they in?" Asked PFC. Fury. "Multiple enemy units are moving in on their location, I have sent the location of Alpha 59 to your GPS's." "Sweet, so we better get moving then." Replied Holden. "Sgt. Legend, You can drive."Alright!" replied Sgt. Legend. "Cpl. Miller, You can man the gun." "Oh Yeah, Nothing like heavy fire power. " Cpl Miller replied with a happy look on his face. So the Squad got into the Humvee.

In Afghanistan, Asia, October 8, 2001, 16:50 Hours
They arrived at the location; Alpha 59 were hiding in a building fighting for their lives. Bravo 24 drove around behind the Building where they found a back door. They got out of the Humvee and went inside. "Glad you made it, we are in big trouble."Said the Alpha 59 Leader. "We see that, the General thought you could use another squad." Replied Capt. Holden. "We sure could, my names Hacon, Lt. Hacon. " "Hello, mine's Capt. Holden but there's no more time for name games, we have a fight to win." Capt. Holden explained.

So Alpha 59 and Bravo 24 take cover and get their weapons out. "So roughly how many of them are there?" Asked Capt. Holden. "Well, Around 30 to 40."Replied Lt. Hacon. "Crap, that's a fair bit." Capt. Holden added. PFC. Fury grabbed a P90 and started firing it. "Whoa, this gun is cool." Said PFC Fury. "It's the P90, Great gun." Replied Lt. Hacon. Holden got out a Barrett 50 Cal. and started sniping. "Two tangoes down." Capt. Holden announced. Miller got out the RPD, Machine gun and started firing that. "Whoa, Fire power baby!" Miller yelled out. By 17:34 Hours , all the enemies were lying on the ground bleeding out or dead.

To be continued...Next Weekend

Why Next weekend you ask?

Well That's when I have more time on my hands but I might do a bit on the story each day of the school week so yeah Keep Tuned for more action packed stories!!

Had To Fix it once again > Stupid formatting or whatever it is.

vinster132
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Oh cool, I'm the General. =D I can't wait for the get part. Good luck on it! XD

Holden012
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Haha yep and Thanks! xD

vinster132
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So, the next part is going to be much longer right?

Holden012
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Yeah most likely

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Pretty awesome part two, can't wait until next weekend. ^^
Although the guns mainly being used by Americans in Afghanistan right now are the M16 and M4 Carbine, Not a P90 or RPD.

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haha, good job! im soooo cocky! xDD but, im still awesome! :P

vinster132
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Pretty awesome part two, can't wait until next weekend. ^^
Although the guns mainly being used by Americans in Afghanistan right now are the M16 and M4 Carbine, Not a P90 or RPD.

It doesn't have to be exactly the same, lolz. =D
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Pretty awesome part two, can't wait until next weekend. ^^
Although the guns mainly being used by Americans in Afghanistan right now are the M16 and M4 Carbine, Not a P90 or RPD.


Aye, but when he said Barret .50 cal I started laughing... The designation you might be looking for is M82 or M82A2 for the bullpup version.

Personally, though, I would like to have a gas-piston ACR that I screwed with so that both .762 and .556 barrels are on a swivel and all I would need to do is unlock the upper receiver, open, rotate, and start using different ammo. Yep, I'm a nerd.
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Pretty good story, all parts were great, I'm no good at writing.

vinster132
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Is the next part out yet? It's been a week?

Holden012
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Sorry , It's been on a delay . I forgot all about it and lost the thread ... I'll be releasing the final chapter today!

Google567
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Holden can I be somewhere in it?

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