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DeadlyVelociraptor
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I don't know why I am not actually using my other thread but yeah... this thread and whatever I will put on it will be about war.... which is my main inspiration...

first poem!

history of war pt. 1

It started when man slid stone against stone
when jabbed to a man to death he moaned
men discovered a useful tool
thats the day it began its rule
a genius one discovered fire
now humanity is only dire
It started by hunting and getting meat
it did it in too much of a regular repeat
Then men happily discovered greed
we are the demons, we are indeed
leader of tribe was stabbed in chest
the assassin discovered the rest
as he took over the tribe with no hesitation
he took it without any real invitation
and discovered he could obtain more power
he started planning every hour
so he can take over more men and space
he made bad the human race

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IcyIndia
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Why wouldn't you be able to post them here?

DeadlyVelociraptor
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cause I don't have a scanner (or a camera)

IcyIndia
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Couldn't you just copy them, by typing?

DeadlyVelociraptor
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concretes? The whole point of concrete is shape... I can't write a poem that is written in a circle

IcyIndia
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Ohh, I get it now. Kind of.

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