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loloynage2
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Little saga by me....maybe not that good...

btw...this is not the real beginning of AG

I will post my first story (i already made it) just after TSL3_needed confirms about the story, b/c i have a feeling this is going to be like The Spam War....so yea...

btw....if you want to be in the story....just post here...b/c this is the beginning of AG, u most at less be iron Lord or higher...or have bean in AG for more then 7 months...

Story coming soon....i hope

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SonnyDude
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But notepad doesn't point out the grammar errors..

loloynage2
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Second part is up! Hope you enjoy!


The beginning of AG part 2

"AHHH!"

Cling! Clang! The little battle for the gold is starting to get bad for the GG. The AG is beating in number, and position GG.

âStay grouped! Kill AG's rats!â Screamed the GG head-guard.

GG has now only 6 more mens, and AG has 18 mens! It was a battle they have lost already. Zlith, just a normal serf that volunteered for this mission to get some money for its poor family was scared. He didn't know what he was going to do. He through this going to be a little mission...

"AHHH!!" Screamed the head-guard. His last word before he felt on the ground dead.


Zlith is now panicking. There was like only 4 for mens of GG! Suddenly he felt a pain in his arm. A arrow penetrated his arm. Zlith screams, and falls on the ground. He try not faint, but in the end he lost conscientious...

"Bad news, my king!" Said Lord dudeguy45.

"Oh really? What is it?" Said king Starscreamer.

"Well the gold you asked, so you can take down your enemy firetail_madness..."

"Whats whit it?"

"His mens toke the gold...."

"NOOOO!!! Damit!!"

"We always could take it back..."

"How?" Said the king.

"By sending people to take it back....like 3 people max." Replied dudeguy45.

"But who?"

Green enters the kings room, gave the king a paper....the report of the outpost.

"I think i found someone...." Said dudeguy45, happy finding a plan.

Later....and at loloynage2's house....

'Me!?!?!? Why me????" Said Green.

"Order from the king Starscreamer....deal whit it!" Said dudeguy45.

"...fine..."

"Oh, and by the way those two people are going to go whit you." Said dudeguy45 by pointing at Sam, and lolo.

"wait....what?" Said Sam, and lolo at the same time.

"You heard me! Squad of 3 people!" Replied dudeguy45.

Dudeguy starts explaining the plan to infiltrate the enemy's land, and take the gold back. He also said that they will be heating towards the enemy's land tomorrow morning, and should arrive two days later. After the explanation dudeguy45 leaves, and let the three of them rest for the night...


Zlith starts opening his eyes. He is in a room, and it doesn't seams like he would be dead...

âHello! My name is Graham...jaza_m, one of my mens saw you, and he toke you here.â

âWhere am i?â Said Zlith, still a bit confused.

âWe are in AG HQ...â

To be continued....

firetail_madness
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Am I good or bad?
Who serves under me?

sourwhatup2
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I've been here I guess almost 10 months and I'm wood duke

I want to join into the story.

Ernie15
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As do I. I've never been in any story before.

zlith
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By "nervous" you better mean "twitchy with schizophrenic paranoia" because I don't get nervous. I get extremely paranoid...and I get a bit schizophrenic

zlith
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Zlith, just a normal serf


I am a gold Squire.
loloynage2
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Am I good or bad?
Who serves under me?


There is no "good" or "bad". You are king of AG (armor Games), and you are against GG (Games of Gondor)

I am a gold Squire.


The beginning of AG
loloynage2
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So the next chapter might take time, b/c i have computer problems...btw...i made a mini-story...

The beginning of AG extra 1

GG is the country were people resides in peace. But one day the worst started to happen...from that day, and will continue until the revolutionary group called AG takes over GG, the finance of GG started to low down...the country was bad, filled whit disorder, and people left GG for NG (Newgrounds) or even MC (miniclip).

One day, one of the loyal prince called firetail_madness asked the king to reform the country. But the king didn't want to hear firetail's opinion. The prince was angry, and one day he decides to make a revolution, and to put down the king. Lots of people join him, like his most loyal man Ernie15. But lots of people didn't join him, and a big fight against GG happen. GG lost lots of mens, but still won victory. firetail went in exile for 5 years whit Ernie15.

He came back 5 years later, and toke a bit of land from GG by force. People rejoined him, and he created a revolutionary group called AG (Armor Games)....It's the beginning of a new era....the Armor Games era!

This is not the actual story. This is only a extra i made, and i think its pretty good

bullmetal
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can i be in the story

loloynage2
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can i be in the story


Sure I will make my next part like in 2 day...
Green12324
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What you mean?


Meaning type it in the program "notepad". Lol I'm a bit late though, looks like you figured it out.

I really like this story though xD Imma be a hero (unless I die...which will probably happen )

Oh, and can I have a grasshopper companion? =D
loloynage2
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Oh, and can I have a grasshopper companion? =D


I will try to put it in the plot
Green12324
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I will try to put it in the plot


Thanks xD
the_manta
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But notepad doesn't point out the grammar errors..


Which is why you c/p punctuation from Word directly to the replace feature (under the edit tab) in NotePad and replace them with NP symbols.

Anyway, it's pretty good, Lolo.

Work on spelling and grammar, and use stronger words, perhaps.

ZOMG! I can haz be in the storeh?? Are there requirements?
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