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Trumpetfury
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The sun was up at its apax. The sky was alight with the firey brightness of the giant ball of gas hanging in the air. The stroller rolled down the hill in Los Angeles, and the mother screamed and ran after it. She tripped, and fell, but, she managed to grab the baby as she was falling, and bring it to safety. A car ran over them. The end.

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pHacon
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The last two sentences made me lul...

The sky was alight with the firey brightness of the giant ball of gas hanging in the air.

More lols.

I much enjoy the randomness.

Other than that, you misspelled 'apex'.
Strop
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Okay trumpetfury, now that you're building up a collection of award winning stories, I'm thinking you should probably keep them in a single thread from this point on! It would make browsing a little bit easier.

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Yes, I enjoy the randomness also. =D

And I agree with Strop, or "The" Ninja. XD

leo99rules
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And the lesson is.

WATCH OUR FOR CARS.

Kyouzou
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No the lesson is, don't let go of your baby stroller and you won't get run over. I definitely agree with strop. Dude, your story was a movie that is awesome, so you wrote, directed, and produced it?

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no the lesson is, don't put crap on the forums that you obviously made 0 effort in making because guess what: no one cares.

SirNoobalot
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i care =P
ok story... amazing ending i started crying and sobbing =P

Kyouzou
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no the lesson is, don't put crap on the forums that you obviously made 0 effort in making because guess what: no one cares.



That's the life lesson that we should all know, the lesson we're referring to is the one inside the story.
CommanderDude7
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wow... its all I can say. I thought nothing could beat your scary story but I was wrong. oh how I was wrong!

Trumpetfury
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DDX mean things arent nice to say first of all. and second of all, thank you Strop, for appreciating my awesomeness, i will make a thread for all my award winning stories, and DDX, i make these stories to make people laugh. not to spam, or or anything.... :\\

Kyouzou
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Why two slashes for the emoticon? Well to be honest they're kinda annoying, but I like reading them and laughing so thank you.

Trumpetfury
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haha, idk why two, i type one, like (:\\) so, but it puts two... i wrote another story...

Strop
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Why two slashes for the emoticon?


Everytime somebody types a backslash it gets parsed wrong by the forum code, so it duplicates :\\
DDX
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DDX mean things arent nice to say first of all. and second of all, thank you Strop, for appreciating my awesomeness, i will make a thread for all my award winning stories, and DDX, i make these stories to make people laugh. not to spam, or or anything.... :\\\\


well I didnt know you made an effort into those stories. I thought they were just spam (since you make a new thread every single time)
if not spam, then a particular form of trolling.
Trumpetfury
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I am quite sorry for offending you, i did not force you to read my stories or anything. I made a thread for all my new ones.

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