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Trumpetfury
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The sun was up at its apax. The sky was alight with the firey brightness of the giant ball of gas hanging in the air. The stroller rolled down the hill in Los Angeles, and the mother screamed and ran after it. She tripped, and fell, but, she managed to grab the baby as she was falling, and bring it to safety. A car ran over them. The end.

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Trumpetfury
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i'll try thoady. can i call you that? thoady? (probly not ) lol

vinster132
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I think he would want you to start working on the story. Heh.

Trumpetfury
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i'll do it tonite!! i must think of wat im going to write first.... :P

snipershot325
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Well one of the most random thing ive ever read!

A car ran over them. The end.
bluedragon9k
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that was kinda random..

Trumpetfury
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well, that was the whole point of it... to grab you, and then throw you off at the end... xD

snipershot325
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Yea,you pretty much build up desriptive details,then at the end its like a four word summary and thats pretty much it.

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