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loloynage2
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Little saga by me....maybe not that good...

btw...this is not the real beginning of AG

I will post my first story (i already made it) just after TSL3_needed confirms about the story, b/c i have a feeling this is going to be like The Spam War....so yea...

btw....if you want to be in the story....just post here...b/c this is the beginning of AG, u most at less be iron Lord or higher...or have bean in AG for more then 7 months...

Story coming soon....i hope

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loloynage2
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k i finished part one...hope you enjoy!

The Beginning of AG part 1

We are in year 1563...3 years before the AG (Armor Games) take over the GG (Games of Gondor)...

loloynage2 was working hard, like all the serfs. Samdawghomie, but everyone calls him Sam, was loloynage2 companion at work. There were working as farmer, like most of the serfs...It was a peaceful life in the GG. Of course there was some attacks by the revolution group AG, but the front line was taking care of that. Somebody was running to them...

âhey there!â

âOh its Green! Welcome!â Said Sam

âWhat brings you up here?â Asked loloynage2

âWell i have to deliver this package to one of the dukes MarioMarioâ said Green

âSo i thought i come and say hi!â he continued.

Green or Green12324 is a guard for GG, and a friend of Sam, and lolo. To be more precise he is a squire. All the quire are archers, so Green is one too.

âWell i got to go! Cya!â said Green

âo.k, cya!â

Green goes to the castle, and lolo, and Sam continue working...

Some were else...

âAre you sure this is a good idea? AG might attack usâ

âNah...we are hiding the gold very well, and we need the gold to finance the kingâ

âYea i guess...â

Suddenly a little noise breaks the silents and a guard (the one that talked first) falls down dead. A arrow killed him! The guard are trying to defend, but they are too many enemies, and the attack was too sudden...

To be continued....

Maybe not that good, but its my first (well second )

Graham
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i wanna be innnnnnn

my account's been here around 19 months

loloynage2
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k sure u can come in....


sry for the question marks....for some reasons it dose that

Graham
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it's because you c+p it into AG textbox

loloynage2
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oh...thats why...

btw part 2 is coming tomorrow or after tomorrow.

Green12324
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I suggest you use notepad to write the story. Word messes it up.

Was that me that died already?! xD Lol I think this will be an interesting story though. Nice idea.

loloynage2
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no xD its some were else...u will know at the next part...

Word messes it up.


i don't use Word...

I suggest you use notepad to write the story.


What you mean?
ariedry
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woah nice story m8

shayneii
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Try to check your grammar/spelling.

Use spell check. It (usually) works

zlith
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Can I be in the story? I don't have a high rank but I have bean here a while.

jaza_m
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I wanna be in the story...

But if you wanna call me the spamlord, its not really upto the spamlord himself..Its more upto Nichodemus XD

loloynage2
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Can I be in the story? I don't have a high rank but I have bean here a while.


Don't worry i already prepared a plot for you...

I wanna be in the story...


Sure

But if you wanna call me the spamlord, its not really upto the spamlord himself..Its more upto Nichodemus XD


xD this is not spam wars anyways, lol.
zlith
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Don't worry i already prepared a plot for you...


I thought so...I probably won't care how you portray me AS LONG AS I AM THE ONLY ONE TO CALL YOU LOLYPOP unless it will be funny...er...which it will...so I start calling you Lolypop then everyone else does but not really what oh yeah.
nichodemus
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Well, AG cannot read certain symbols from Word. If you c/p directly from Word, then it is recommended that you retype every single punctuation in it.

Notepad as in the application. A more primitive form of Word.

loloynage2
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k...I found this other thing and i will try one sentence to see if it works:

âHello! World!â

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