"Why are you following me?!" She exclaimed. "You look like a... tasty time." He said with an evil chuckle. "What are you..."She begs. "Just a hungry bystander." He says as he comes closer. "Why me, ... Why me?" She says as her life slowly and painfuly comes to an end. _______________________________________
When you think about life. What do you think of? Do you see a world where things are possible? A bright future? Or do you see a world where we are all in chaos? Every man for himself? If you think of the first one, stop reading this right now. Just exit out, and never think of this again. Go live your happy life. But if you chose the second one, ... well, you might be able to keep reading. This is My world. The bad world you might say. You could think this is a fantasy. But it is real. You just need to open you eyes. This is a world where every step you take, someone might kill you. If you are to survive, You have to know about everyone. I will tell you about a few if you want to know. The few that are okay to be around, are the fairies, a few of the elves, maybe a demon or two, some of the wolves. But I don't know of any vampires that are good. Besides my self that is.
The fairies have many classifacations, but that would take a while. The Elves.... are playful you could say. But they are dangerous if you piss them off. Demons.... oh the demons... The ones that are okay, are the money hungry ones. They are the ones that will do anything for money, and don't care if a human is the one that gives the payment. You just have to make the highest offer. The wolves are nice you could say. If they realize that you are better in combat, they will be good. But the vampires... Pure evil. I have never met on that isn't. I am not saying it isn't possible, but I havne't met any. Ever. And I have been here for quite some time.
I haven't introduced my self have I? Well then. I will give you my name. But not right now.
You see, I am a book in the making, and my author is thinking about these certain things, like names and such. If you would like to be in the book, I think you should get to know my author and she might add you. my author is MoonFairy. Did you know that in my book there are Moon Fairies? Yep. There are. Anyways. My author is really awesome, and would like it if you posted a comment or two on what you think of me so far. If you do, She might finish my chapter! Do you know how happy that would make me?!?!?! I WANT MY CHAPTER TO BE FINISHED. YOU BETTER COMMENT OR ELSE I WILL FIND YOU AND HAUNT YOU AS THE CHAPTER NEVER FINISHED! Okay yeah so you don't want that do you? DO YOU?! Okay then. Comment and my author will think I am important enough to finish! Please?! I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER! Thank you!
umm suggestion. if a creepy emo lookin guy was in your house or w/e i don't think you'd talk about the popo.. i have never heard anybody use that word seriously. the cops is normally what springs to mind when in a situation like that. People, please check out my wolfteam the book n stuff and comment. XD its good so far mate keep working.
You have to remember an antagonist isn't necessarily a bad character it is simply the person, or object that works against the main character. I believe you're more suited to the view of villain.
Vampires, in my POV, are pale, have interesting hair, usually guys (not to be sexist or anything), they can turn into bats, they have long fangs (not too long), and they have sort of a mix between Dracula and Edward look. They are mostly on the evil side, and they love blood.
That is my version of a vampire. Although this is what most people have said -ish.
Oh btw my book is called "League of Realms" but I had a typo and the thread is Leauge of Realms.
I don't mind if it doesn't conflict with my version of it. My type of vampire pale but not sickly, awesome hair, retractable fags, cant go out in the sunlight, burn if tougched by something holy, and are allergic to garilc.
You missed the n in fangs. Without the n, it is a sexual slur for homosexuals (as well as cigarettes and a bundle of sticks), so good reason for bleeping it out.
Nothing is wrong with the Fay. They are just creepy as hell whenever they decided to go kidnap normal beings and make them their slaves, putting in replacements where they took the humans...
