This is a thread where Fallen'll be posting his pencil works. Fallen is very open to constructive criticism, and will refer all impolite people to the rules of conduct of this Ag section. Without any further ado, Fallen will post a Blazingly hot Flareon upon this page.
You're not too bad at this. In fact, I wish I could draw like this!! I just want to point out that to me it seems like you want to use a lot of stright* lines. Try to curve them a bit more.
Hall, did you only check the murkrow drawing? Anyhow, I'm starting to practice my hatching so straight lines and traits are actually my keys to improvement. Anyhow, be sure to check all the thread's history^^.
I move out the first of july, I'm in the process of packing things into boxes. And yes, I'm confusing; I'm aiming for total Ganticness, even though this is impossible for anyone other than Gantic. No seriously...:O