Great so, I've seen a recent outbreak of zombie stories here on ArmorGames, and i've been reading some lately, and i think i'd like to try one of my own.
The whole roles cast thing? I'm going to need people for this and characters. I'll only accept a few, and will tell you when the cut-off is.
To be in this, im going to need the following data
Name: (needs to be a full, realistic name.) Age: (anything goes here) Job: (anything from McDonalds, to Military. no "special ops super elite commando sniper" jobs accepted. Military makes you a seargeant or a private. please, we do need some normal people in this ) History: (Be as in depth as possible and try to be creative. A paragraph or two will do.) Personality: (remember, were talking real life here. so no "im mr super strong corageous brave who can bench press 500 lbs and fears nothing." Use your own if you have to, pick out thebest flaws, and the perfections.) Anything else?: (name it here!) Do you mind dieing?: (in the story that is!)
after filling this out, just post it to here. not only will you be a member of the story, but i will be asking you from time to time such as, "what you would do in this situation", or "what do you think of this?" Things like that and everythign to do with the story. input is welcome, and i need characters!
Its really annoying, but it can still be read... Your very good at describing and making suspense fill the air, I could imagine everything in my head very well. Great job.
Name: James Wilson Age: 24 Job: none im filthy rich so i dont need a job History: it all started with alexander wilson in the 1930s, mining oil for years really payed off. at age 48 he was a billionaire. he had a gorgous wife and everything he ever wanted, he was getting into the wrong stuff though. he went to bars daily and got drunk and his wife soon left him and took half of his money away. A month later Alexander realizes that his wife had been pregnant to two children, both boys. One was named John, and the other was named fredrick. Fredrick was a famous artist for a short period of time, and John had continued in his fathers oil area and instead found diamonds. The good life continued for the family, but sadly fredrick died. John had four kids, jane, rick, jeff, and henrick. Rick had one child who married a beautiful woman named Kate, Rick and Kate are James parents. Personality: James is a rich snob with a very good body, he is tanned and handsome with brown hair. his looks are nice but his personality aint Anything else?: James is also dating the gorgous reporter lien waiver and would do anything for her, they have been dating for 6 months. Do you mind dieing?: i dont mind if i die just make sure aliengirl lives i will die protecting her
Name:Kyle Wynd Age:12 Job:Mows lawns History:His dad left him hen he was born lives with his stugleing mother. Personality:Shy, brave, smart. Anything Else:Has no friends at school no one knows why not even the people who dont like him.
sheesh...been out a few days... and UnlimitedDragon..it's not so hard..to read,registrations are closed.and this has taken a lonnng time. oh, and XSilentPhantomX, if you are reading this, can you just forget, hesitating to kill,and let my charcter use a gun? kthxbye
gee thanks limebreaker... i actually planned on this being one of longer works, and i apologize, ive been really busy. but remember this is meant to be realistic, and 11 yr old dont normally get guns ok?
Yeah so im still working with the set up and this is going to take awhile.... youre finding out about people... youll get your action later i think.... sorry to any who feel this is slow-going.. like i said im wanting to try a longer work that i dont burst type on the spot.
Brett Van Wielder was so excited. As he strolled through the brisk New York air, he rubbed his free hand on his coffee to help warm it. Brett smiled, he had finally gotten a call. A young couple was getting married, and their rich parents were paying all expenses, and that included the dear wedding photographer, him. His suitcase of cameras jingled from the hanging tags clinking off of them. "Finally," he thought, "Finally i got another call." Brett had fallen on some poor times recently, and he was making roughly $6,000 off of this one job, one of his biggest catches since he'd started. He whistled a small tune as he walked into the small city church, sandwiched between a lawyer's office complex and some business place labeled, "Praston Town Business Association." Pushing open the large white double doors, Brett saw everything was a flurry inside of the church. The mother of the bride rushed over to him as soon as he entered. "Oh my goodness, thank god, you're here!" She said as the haggard looking bride's father walked slowly behind her. Brett looked around and watched as people all rushed around, making last minute preperations for the reception. He smiled at the bride's mother, Mrs. Parkers and said to her with a smile, "Yes Ma'am, I'm ready to go, where can i set up?" "Over there in the back room, on the right, you see it?" She said hurridly as she pointed to a room on the side of the sanctuary normally used for private baptisms. Scooting towards a crowd of people trying to put up a table of concessions, she told her husband, "Honey, pay the photographer." Brett was left standing there with the father of the bride. "So how much is it up front?" He asked as he bent down and pulled out a pen and a checkbook. Brett ran his tongue acrost his lips, he'd never really taken money up front, it was usually given when he delivered the photos. "How about $2,600?" He asked him. "Sure, whatever you want." The father said, hardly paying attention to anything. The man looked horrible, like he'd barely slept in days. Brett quietly chuckled to himself as he thought about how his father was when his sister got married. He knew someday he'd have to go through it too, with his beautiful daughter Satie who was only eight right now. The Father finished signing the check and writing the amount, and he handed it to Brett then sent him off to the backroom. Yes, Brett could tell this would be a great deal. Maybe he could even somehow work another few hundred or two out of the rich parents.....
Lien Waiver was flying. So fast, so exhiliratingly fast. She had no idea where she was going, but as she soared she was joyful beyond comprehension. The wind lifted beneath her as she rose on smooth, warm currents of air. Then she heard her boss, saying those magic words. "Meet our new head of the Real Estate Condo Division, Lien Waiver!!! SHe could almost hear the people clapping as she stepped up and looked at her jealous rivals who had all competed for the job.... Then, someone was calling her. "Lien?" "Lien!!" Somebody was yelling, closeby...
Lien awoke with a start. Her secretary was waking shaking her and yelling her name. "Oh.. hey Linda... Five more minutes..." she muttered. "Lien the announcement is in 10!" Linda yells into her ear. "Oh my god!" Lien yelled as she jerked her head up from her desk, sending papers scattering acrost the floor of the small office. There was no way she, Lien Waiver, young businesswoman success story was going to be late. Linda sighed and picked the papers up off the floor and said to Lien, "Boss said in the main conference room, the one on the 14th floor?" "Oh, right..." Lien muttered trying to fix her waist-high skirt as she swept out of the door. Linda sighed, she knew Lien was successful, but maybe a bit too hopeful in wanting this promotion. She shook her head as she went to begin to pick up the papers.
More later ok? im sorry if its not actiony or moving fast enough for some people who want a quick easy short term read >_>
No problem at all, I have read some really great books that start slow. I think that it is great that you are taking this seriously and making this sound like a real novel, I literally cant stop reading because of how great this is going. I love your writing style,and I love how you included all of those little details like Brett passed by a place called Praston Town Business Association. Take as much time as you want, its just people can get very anxious if you have not said anything in a while, they think that you gave up if you dont post anything. You dont even have to post a chapter, you can just make little comments like: I'm almost done, this one is going to be great, etc. Cant wait for the next one.
