ForumsArt, Music, and Writing[req]MoonFairy's Metrophobia - A lesson in contradictions

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MoonFairy
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Well hi there.
As some of you may know, I had a previous writing thread.
But I was so sick of reviving it, I had it locked.
I would LOVE it if you gave me actual feedback, not just "lol I like it."
That is a bummer. You have no idea, putting time and effort into something but just saying you like it. Tell me WHAT you liked about it. Or what you thought could be better.

Now. I'm not gonna beg or anything, but
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T LET THIS THING DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!
See? No begging.

Now. I will post all of my poetry shiitake from my old thread, so new people can have a looksie.



And I love everyone that told me to not give up. You know who you are, mah peeps. Sure it is torture looking back on what I wrote, but I really like poetry, so I'm gonna keep hoping I make something great.

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MoonFairy
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We have a deal.
If only I could make deals like this with everyone else.

deathopper
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I'll make you a deal. I'll critic your poetry if and only if you continue writing great poetry.

MoonFairy
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Well, I would have to start that :P
None of it is great, it is just... there.
I will close this at 8 AG time, so if anyone has anything to say, put it in now.

I'll just be... posting all of this, over there, every few days or so, so everyone can get a look at everything.

Then I will continue writing.

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