Well hi there. As some of you may know, I had a previous writing thread. But I was so sick of reviving it, I had it locked. I would LOVE it if you gave me actual feedback, not just "lol I like it." That is a bummer. You have no idea, putting time and effort into something but just saying you like it. Tell me WHAT you liked about it. Or what you thought could be better.
Now. I'm not gonna beg or anything, but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DON'T LET THIS THING DIE!!!!!!!!!!!! See? No begging.
Now. I will post all of my poetry shiitake from my old thread, so new people can have a looksie.
And I love everyone that told me to not give up. You know who you are, mah peeps. Sure it is torture looking back on what I wrote, but I really like poetry, so I'm gonna keep hoping I make something great.
Once a unicorn Came across a rainbow. He tasted it And invented Skittles But only after The transformation Into a Rainbow Unicorn. It sounds horrible, Yes I know. But what I find amazing Is the face that he glows.
I'm sure *most* people just lurk here, and have looked at all of your poems. And the people who have just started to look recently, probably looked at everything as well.
Something a bit more uplifting, in honor of my great mood.
No matter the turn of events No matter the situation They stuck through it all Even through the complications. I've always questioned their feelings for me I've never thought that I changed But apparently I have Because now I can brighten their day. I always thought I brought them down But I see that I make them smile I can manipulate the air around And make our times worthwhile.
d(^_^)b honestly, i'm not one much to read or even want to write poetry, but these really enthralled me. Very good job. N' I mean very very very very very Very VEry VERy VERY good job...Lol.
Thank you Efan. I know I couldn't go on and on, without it getting too long, so I stopped at where it got to the point And Thank you redeyes. I really appreciate it.
